Are we alone?

Are we alone?

A Story by AaronFreitas
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Real short true story... this was me last night.

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I could feel it… she was standing there watching me as I slept. Subconsciously I awoke to ask her if everything was ok but she didn't respond. I rolled over and looked up to see her shadow... she looked me in my eyes then walked away. Sometimes I forget I live alone but in reality we are never really alone are we?

 


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alf
Hi Aaron. I am not a great fan of prose in poetry, and so very seldom read it. You have written well and it was a pleasant read, but personally, I think that format lacks punch. I did love the wording, you got it right !!! just . . . I'm into structure, not reading books, I guess, alf

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

I hear ya buddy... I just had to get out what happened to me when I woke up... true story lol. Than.. read more
alf

2 Years Ago

Cool!! I'll keep reading your writes!!!!
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you buddy I appreciate that



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Sometimes it is very hard to distinguish dreams from reality and this one sounded very distinct. I love your style of writing. It begs for more :-)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Dara... I appreciate your compliments and review :)
Very interesting story Aaron, well done! :)

A few years ago, I woke up in the middle of the night, opened my eyes, and I couldn't see my husband who was right in front of me. All I could see was a bright light that was soft to look at. I was so sleepy that I couldn't stay awake, but I remember thinking that I must remember what happened when I wake up.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

I'd much rather it be my guardian angel and not the brain problem lol...
Madison Rose

2 Years Ago

Lol, can you believe he even suggested that, what are friends for, but to scare a person! My brain i.. read more
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

haha you are right my friend
This is a spooky write that lingers after you read this, maybe me but has a punch!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Haha thanks Andrew... I woke up and saw her... it creeped me out! Today I woke up with a long scrat.. read more
By the way...thanks for the read request. Rating 100#

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Aww thanks! You made my night :)
Dani The Unreviewed

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Well, i enjoyed the story, and got wondering...well done.

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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Why did i read this one now...right before bed...dark, quiet...now my imagination is working over time!! lol
I would be outta that house if it were me..lol great write !!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sereenaoutloud

2 Years Ago

Lol I'm the biggest wuss when it comes to the dark or being. Alone in the house at night... Especial.. read more
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

No lie last night I was here watching tv and a preview for a scary movie came on and the first part .. read more
sereenaoutloud

2 Years Ago

Hahahah that is too funny... :) lol
A well and descriptive write. Describing so much in these lines.
We are not, of course, alone.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

No we are not my friend :) Kind of creeped me out.... thanks for your review Saddam :)
My god. This is superb.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Awww thanks Megan! I miss you where you been! Appreciate you reading it :)
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alf
Hi Aaron. I am not a great fan of prose in poetry, and so very seldom read it. You have written well and it was a pleasant read, but personally, I think that format lacks punch. I did love the wording, you got it right !!! just . . . I'm into structure, not reading books, I guess, alf

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

I hear ya buddy... I just had to get out what happened to me when I woke up... true story lol. Than.. read more
alf

2 Years Ago

Cool!! I'll keep reading your writes!!!!
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you buddy I appreciate that

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