Are we alone?

Real short true story... this was me last night.

I could feel it… she was standing there watching me as I slept. Subconsciously I awoke to ask her if everything was ok but she didn't respond. I rolled over and looked up to see her shadow... she looked me in my eyes then walked away. Sometimes I forget I live alone but in reality we are never really alone are we?

 

Author's Note

Let me know your thoughts

Reviews

[alf]

Hi Aaron. I am not a great fan of prose in poetry, and so very seldom read it. You have written well and it was a pleasant read, but personally, I think that format lacks punch. I did love the wording, you got it right !!! just . . . I'm into structure, not reading books, I guess, alf

[AaronFreitas]

I hear ya buddy... I just had to get out what happened to me when I woke up... true story lol. Thanks for stopping by buddy

[alf]

Cool!! I'll keep reading your writes!!!!

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you buddy I appreciate that

[Jamestown]

I too have experienced similar situation, so if you ask me I would say
no we're not alone, but to each there own:) I know the Lord is always
present:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[AaronFreitas]

Yes he is my friend... we are definitely not alone. Thanks for your comments buddy :)

[Jamestown]

Always my pleasure:)

[AaronFreitas]

Thanks buddy I appreciate it

[KWP]

I have dreams like this all the time - you know those lucid dreams where you just are not sure if you are in this reality or perhaps the dreamtime - so that said I can relate - and I did so as soon as I started reading too - short sweet and leaves the 'door open' for the reader to form their own questions - nice XX

[AaronFreitas]

Thank you KWP... I'm not sure whats going on in this house of mine but I know there is no one else paying bills, cooking or cleaning so they need to leave me alone lol... thanks for your review :)

[KWP]

oh now that's just freaky !!!

[AaronFreitas]

Yes indeed

[KWP]

I just got a whole new feeling about this piece - and it doesn't feel like my lucid dreaming X

[AaronFreitas]

haha whats the new feeling

[Perkele.7885]

Do we know who she was? a stranger? WAS SHE MY EX? Was she holding a knife? You better stay away from my ex! She stabbed me in my back!

[AaronFreitas]

Lol I'd probably have a better chance of it being my ex... she would definitely stab me. Her specialty is trying to run me over with her car... yes that happened once haha. No idea who she is... I assume a spirit hanging out rent free. Thanks buddy

[Perkele.7885]

Get a receipt if she keeps hanging out there.

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

Super Glad I read this at night, no bad dreams for me tonight ;)

No really it was gripping and a great surprise at the end, I didn't see that coming.

Great Job

[AaronFreitas]

Haha sorry about that... try waking up to that at like 2 am! lol thanks for your kind words and review :)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

You definitely know I relate to this one.. If you remember what I've told you, then you'll understand what I mean by that...
This was great, by the way.

[AaronFreitas]

I knew you would relate to it :) Thanks for the review Nikki hope all is well :)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Eh... As well as can be expected... I'm surviving, or at least streaking by..

[wordman]

buddy , i can relate to this,with chronic ptsd i see crap all the time,get up to fight and the`re gone

[AaronFreitas]

Man that is tough... this one... well this house I just moved into is old and I am pretty sure she is a spirit hanging out here. She could at least cook lol

[wordman]

well hell ask her lol