Are we alone?

Are we alone?

A Story by AaronFreitas
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Real short true story... this was me last night.

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I could feel it… she was standing there watching me as I slept. Subconsciously I awoke to ask her if everything was ok but she didn't respond. I rolled over and looked up to see her shadow... she looked me in my eyes then walked away. Sometimes I forget I live alone but in reality we are never really alone are we?

 


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alf
Hi Aaron. I am not a great fan of prose in poetry, and so very seldom read it. You have written well and it was a pleasant read, but personally, I think that format lacks punch. I did love the wording, you got it right !!! just . . . I'm into structure, not reading books, I guess, alf

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

I hear ya buddy... I just had to get out what happened to me when I woke up... true story lol. Than.. read more
alf

2 Years Ago

Cool!! I'll keep reading your writes!!!!
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you buddy I appreciate that



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I too have experienced similar situation, so if you ask me I would say
no we're not alone, but to each there own:) I know the Lord is always
present:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yes he is my friend... we are definitely not alone. Thanks for your comments buddy :)
Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Always my pleasure:)
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thanks buddy I appreciate it
I have dreams like this all the time - you know those lucid dreams where you just are not sure if you are in this reality or perhaps the dreamtime - so that said I can relate - and I did so as soon as I started reading too - short sweet and leaves the 'door open' for the reader to form their own questions - nice XX

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yes indeed
KWP

2 Years Ago

I just got a whole new feeling about this piece - and it doesn't feel like my lucid dreaming X
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

haha whats the new feeling
Do we know who she was? a stranger? WAS SHE MY EX? Was she holding a knife? You better stay away from my ex! She stabbed me in my back!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Lol I'd probably have a better chance of it being my ex... she would definitely stab me. Her specia.. read more
Perkele.7885

2 Years Ago

Get a receipt if she keeps hanging out there.
Super Glad I read this at night, no bad dreams for me tonight ;)

No really it was gripping and a great surprise at the end, I didn't see that coming.

Great Job

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Haha sorry about that... try waking up to that at like 2 am! lol thanks for your kind words and rev.. read more
You definitely know I relate to this one.. If you remember what I've told you, then you'll understand what I mean by that...
This was great, by the way.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

I knew you would relate to it :) Thanks for the review Nikki hope all is well :)
♥Ashley Nicole Cameron♥

2 Years Ago

Eh... As well as can be expected... I'm surviving, or at least streaking by..
buddy , i can relate to this,with chronic ptsd i see crap all the time,get up to fight and the`re gone

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Man that is tough... this one... well this house I just moved into is old and I am pretty sure she i.. read more
 wordman

2 Years Ago

well hell ask her lol

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