Love is a mystery

Love is a mystery

A Poem by AaronFreitas

You can see it in his eyes he is ready for love,

Feeling like tonight could be the lucky night.

First date in a while and she is looking fine!

But what will he feel at the end of the night?

 

They share many smiles and bursts of laughs…

For a second no painful memories exist.

But as the night slowly withers away,

He starts to pull away and resist.

 

She wants to lay and cuddle on the couch,

So he spends the night willingly pretending…

That this current woman makes him happy,

But it’s only getting closer to ending.

 

Hot and steamy she screams his name,

She’s thinking she’s found Mr. Right.

While thoughts flood his erratic mind…

How he can get rid of her after tonight?

 

He lacks a connection with every date…

Something that is almost unexplainable.

Add this date to the growing list of women

That can’t build any emotion that’s sustainable.

 

They come and they go but they never know

That his heart is closed because his eyes don’t show

He is broken inside though his words do not lie

Love is as mysterious as angels in the sky.

 


© 2015 AaronFreitas



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Sad story of love and very well done. This looks to be maybe one of your new open pieces of work??? Anyway I like it. Thanks for sharing. Sounds like stuck in your own head and trying to find someone that wants to see if their key works to get inside.

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

3 Years Ago

Yes of course Willard :) That was my night haha.... it's a new feeling of shutting people out. I w.. read more



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love cant be forced upon that's why its a mystery. this guy is trying to force it on his new list of women he meets and that is why he is in misery.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Kind of depressing but you probably got all the emotions from everyone just right.

Posted 1 Year Ago


sun glasses hide my eyes for i keep my feelings hidden like a mystery
but what is in ones heart can also be a mystery to others and to ones self

Posted 2 Years Ago


Interesting view on the one night stand topic and reasons for doing so. Reminds me of a piece I share here on WC, but from the women's perspective. Forgive me, but I have to leave a comment on the structure, it just doesn't read smoothly all the time and I think, it could be improved to feature an even nicer flow. (Because I think, you intended to stick to certain rhyme pattern, it just doesn't read as undisturbingly as it maybe should).

Posted 2 Years Ago


Love your rhyme in this poem. As a devotee of rhyme this one really caught the eye. A nice piece of work, Aaron.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Doodley :) Rhyming is something that comes naturally when I write and I enjoy i.. read more
It has a sad tone but beautifully expressed. We meet so many people but we don't feel that connection with everyone. Only some people are allowed the opportunity of breaking down our walls and discovering who we actually are. The rest are just 'somebody'...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

You're right... the rest are just somebody. We wait for the one that makes us happy and lets us be .. read more
That was sad but i like the idea of it. I guess it's hard to find the one for you or at least someone you are willing to open up to.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yes indeed Firemay. There have been plenty of pretenders so far but no one with a true heart :) Th.. read more
Very sad,yet beautifully expressed in such wild emotions.His heart is closed and never to be opened and no one's found the key of love that he needs and seeks.Wonderful write;-]

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Weeping willow :)
sad story of love but really nicely done !!!! the flow just kept me reading !!!!
Aaron you really are an amazing writer !!! keep it up
100 points from me !!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zunie frost

2 Years Ago

same here !! i always got nervous when i post a poetry because english isn't my native language ... .. read more
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Aww thanks... I'll help as much as I can :)
zunie frost

2 Years Ago

thank you !!!
Sad! People come and go, but their echoes remain.
Lost love has left you broken! But one should not succumb to that. Life is a journey to discover and rediscover itself. It's meaning, it's purpose, it's spirit. And it can only be worth living, if one really tries to. To move on and live again. Try harder, dear friend to be happy, for it's aptly said that,
'Happiness is a choice!'

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

It is a choice Jyoti... I'm trying my friend :) Thanks for your awesome review :)
Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Hope u sincerely do. You are very welcome.

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