Love is a mystery

Love is a mystery

A Poem by AaronFreitas

You can see it in his eyes he is ready for love,

Feeling like tonight could be the lucky night.

First date in a while and she is looking fine!

But what will he feel at the end of the night?

 

They share many smiles and bursts of laughs…

For a second no painful memories exist.

But as the night slowly withers away,

He starts to pull away and resist.

 

She wants to lay and cuddle on the couch,

So he spends the night willingly pretending…

That this current woman makes him happy,

But it’s only getting closer to ending.

 

Hot and steamy she screams his name,

She’s thinking she’s found Mr. Right.

While thoughts flood his erratic mind…

How he can get rid of her after tonight?

 

He lacks a connection with every date…

Something that is almost unexplainable.

Add this date to the growing list of women

That can’t build any emotion that’s sustainable.

 

They come and they go but they never know

That his heart is closed because his eyes don’t show

He is broken inside though his words do not lie

Love is as mysterious as angels in the sky.

 


© 2015 AaronFreitas



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Sad story of love and very well done. This looks to be maybe one of your new open pieces of work??? Anyway I like it. Thanks for sharing. Sounds like stuck in your own head and trying to find someone that wants to see if their key works to get inside.

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yes of course Willard :) That was my night haha.... it's a new feeling of shutting people out. I w.. read more



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a complicated man Aaron, he struggles with love and finding that right one may be beyond him, great poem which i think would be a good song lyric, well done :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yes sir... life gets confusing at times, emotions change and it's trying to come to terms with unfam.. read more
I love this!! This is what I'm wondering EVERY SINGLE TIME when I am with my boyfriend. Love, just like life, is unfair, and mysterious.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

It is definitely mysterious... hard to understand what you can't control and that is whoever is atta.. read more
Sad story of love and very well done. This looks to be maybe one of your new open pieces of work??? Anyway I like it. Thanks for sharing. Sounds like stuck in your own head and trying to find someone that wants to see if their key works to get inside.

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yes of course Willard :) That was my night haha.... it's a new feeling of shutting people out. I w.. read more
A closed heart is an empty place... the shutters are drawn so no one can even peep inside... I understand this very well... it is very difficult piece together a shattered heart when all you have are old memories and tears to work with... great penning, my friend

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you FT I appreciate your words :) It is difficult and even more so trying to figure out how t.. read more
Love the poem
Maybe those women are selfish
and maybe that's why he has closed up

Maybe the one who will stay
Will be the one lady that refuses to cuddle or go for the physical one night stand
The one who will sit by his side
For the sake of doing so
Wanting nothing

Supporting him, loving him not knowing what will happen
Because she can and she will

only then his soul will heal

Love it Aaron

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Nisreenaa.... you know me too well already :) Someday she will come along and s.. read more
Perfection accomplished :D Awesome :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you my friend :)
Some horses are not meant to be tamed, you get thrown off so you find another one to tame and jump on for the ride . nice write!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

haha love the analogy... I want Seabiscuit and all I'm getting are pony's! lol
andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

Ok Its done you have a biscuit. You now have two wishes left!!:)
ah Aaron I love the honesty...its a great piece and a tale as old as time...well done :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much micky :) Just another day in this wonderful world of mine lol
micky

2 Years Ago

lol yeah this "cough" wonderful world lol :P
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

haha I hear ya my friend :)
A sad tale Aaron but one which I guess happens quite frequently as many have been burnt and find it hard to get back in the saddle, so to speak. Told in a sensitive voice with some regret intoned.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yes indeed my friend... this is one aspect of life that is still confusing... the I want this but I .. read more
Great poem, telling an interesting story. Well done :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you IM.... this story is my night... and the truth. Glad you liked it my friend :)
Dani The Unreviewed

2 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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