Love is a mystery

Love is a mystery

A Poem by AaronFreitas

You can see it in his eyes he is ready for love,

Feeling like tonight could be the lucky night.

First date in a while and she is looking fine!

But what will he feel at the end of the night?

 

They share many smiles and bursts of laughs…

For a second no painful memories exist.

But as the night slowly withers away,

He starts to pull away and resist.

 

She wants to lay and cuddle on the couch,

So he spends the night willingly pretending…

That this current woman makes him happy,

But it’s only getting closer to ending.

 

Hot and steamy she screams his name,

She’s thinking she’s found Mr. Right.

While thoughts flood his erratic mind…

How he can get rid of her after tonight?

 

He lacks a connection with every date…

Something that is almost unexplainable.

Add this date to the growing list of women

That can’t build any emotion that’s sustainable.

 

They come and they go but they never know

That his heart is closed because his eyes don’t show

He is broken inside though his words do not lie

Love is as mysterious as angels in the sky.

 


© 2015 AaronFreitas



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Sad story of love and very well done. This looks to be maybe one of your new open pieces of work??? Anyway I like it. Thanks for sharing. Sounds like stuck in your own head and trying to find someone that wants to see if their key works to get inside.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yes of course Willard :) That was my night haha.... it's a new feeling of shutting people out. I w.. read more



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Not everyone can show the true essence of love, but you have done a wonderful job in depicting how everyone is fighting their own battle. I hope you find 'true love' soon! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much :) I sure hope I do too I'm just not sure if my heart is ready... we will see :.. read more
Nice, that last part was very pretty.
Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much bluefire :) Appreciate your review
Bluefire

2 Years Ago

No problemo


"They come and they go but they never know
That his heart is closed because his eyes don’t show
He is broken inside though his words do not lie
Love is as mysterious as angels in the sky. "
Beautifulllll

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much :) I tried my best
Oh, that is a very sad and painful poem. For both parties. The women who want to get into the heart of the man, having to prove that they're worthy of being with him. And for the man who cannot seem to open his heart to anyone and consequently, has to break so many people's hearts.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thanks Nadia :) It's definitely a struggle to open this heart of mine... how you been by the way fe.. read more
Nadia Gerassimenko

2 Years Ago

hahaha i know me too!!! i have lately been busy with freelance work, i am so bad at managing my tine.. read more
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Not much new staying busy trying to keep up with everything and it gets harder to get on and write w.. read more
This is a sad story of love and the problem with a bunch of relationships the poem is quite amazing of a write

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much... glad you understood what I was getting at... awesome picture by the way :)
child of God

2 Years Ago

No problem and Thank you
Great way of portraying this individual! Shows the heartbreak he himself is suffering so that he is unable to show or give real love! Great as always!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you my friend :) I appreciate your compliment :D
Hey Bro, I like this one, is poetically engaging, you showed great
range of writing in this piece along with a terrific story line
And great substance at the end, awesome, love is a mystery! Thanks for Sharing! :-)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thanks E G Ten... appreciate the kind words :)
Love is, indeed, buddy... a mystery. One of the many few mysteries that we will never fully understand but it's like a pill that counters the addiction of all other things going on in the universe. Your words are amazing and I always enjoy reading your writing. You're very relatable. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thanks buddy... sometimes we search and it just avoids us until we find the right one... hopefully w.. read more
I had a client the other day that was going through the exact same thing. He compared everyone to his mother.. I said NO!!!! Say that and you will lose everyone,. But in all seriousness you are further along than most. You know that there is a place inside that is broken,.,and now it's up to you if you want to fix it.. your perfect as is..xo

Posted 2 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Haha classic...I don't want anyone like my mother but just someone that makes me happy and is lookin.. read more
Lily Mae

2 Years Ago

I wish you luck and good things:) and your welcome..xo
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much I appreciate that :)
Great expression and good work


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thanks Michael... appreciate your kind words :)

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