Demonic Plague

Demonic Plague

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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I honestly don't even know where this came from but when I wrote this is what came out.

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I have an infatuation with demons

that inexplicably pluck innocent

thoughts from the mind and

replace them with pure evil. 

 

If I can’t fight them off

I will find myself drowning

in a pool of blood and death

while slowly roasting in hell.

 

Where do we find strength

when all we know has already

turned its back on us and

left us to rot in a world full of hate?

 

We leave our lasting impression

by defining the strength we find

even if only momentarily to fight

and destroy what is our fate.

 


© 2015 AaronFreitas



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This is so of a fantasy form of poetry; some of the choice of words depicts mid-darkness and horror. Words like pure-evil, drowning in a pool of blood and death, roasting in hell, are threatening to the poet and knowing such predicaments are sure to come unless he defeated that which need to be fight off, haunts him. Many things are to be drawn from this piece of amazing write-up, but this I've for now. Thanks for sharing.... Bona!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

I'm always glad with my work when I read your reviews. I love the way you analyze and really search.. read more



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You gotta acknowledge your dark side buddy! Good one.
Do you want momentarily or monetarily at the end??

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yeah ANTO pointed that out... I think it changed automatically in spell check but I got it fixed tha.. read more
i really like this and i love the meaning behind this.. sorry for the late review i have tons of read requests.. i was wondering if you could give my story addiction a read.. you don't have to if you don't want to but i would really appreciate it

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Of course I'll review yours :) I have like 279 requests I'm so behind lol but I opened it already s.. read more
Gabby Gellerman

2 Years Ago

same i don't really come online that often so i have over 100
it came from a great writing mind obviously, a ghoulishly creepy poem my friend and one that's very enjoyable with a chink of light to end :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Richard for the compliment :) I didn't realize how long it had been since I wro.. read more
I just love this one!
I like the meaning of it!
Keep it up!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Emily :) Appreciate your review
A bit dark but I liked this piece

Overall good job


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Michael... yeah a bit dark but I am glad you enjoyed :)
That's strong and scary too. Well written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Gaurav :)
It can be a never ending battle but in the end I believe if we approach everyone and everything we do with love, love wins out each time! This is a great write with profound meaning.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

You make a great point... love does win out if we allow it to :) Thanks Dara
WoW!!!
awesome dark and meaningful write Aaron........
i really loved it!!!
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thanks buddy! I am glad you liked it :)
i like this one alot .

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thanks buddy... something that just came to me :)
You turn to God Bro... That simple.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

I hear ya buddy... thanks :)

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