Demonic Plague

Demonic Plague

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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I honestly don't even know where this came from but when I wrote this is what came out.

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I have an infatuation with demons

that inexplicably pluck innocent

thoughts from the mind and

replace them with pure evil. 

 

If I can’t fight them off

I will find myself drowning

in a pool of blood and death

while slowly roasting in hell.

 

Where do we find strength

when all we know has already

turned its back on us and

left us to rot in a world full of hate?

 

We leave our lasting impression

by defining the strength we find

even if only momentarily to fight

and destroy what is our fate.

 


© 2015 AaronFreitas



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This is so of a fantasy form of poetry; some of the choice of words depicts mid-darkness and horror. Words like pure-evil, drowning in a pool of blood and death, roasting in hell, are threatening to the poet and knowing such predicaments are sure to come unless he defeated that which need to be fight off, haunts him. Many things are to be drawn from this piece of amazing write-up, but this I've for now. Thanks for sharing.... Bona!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

I'm always glad with my work when I read your reviews. I love the way you analyze and really search.. read more



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It is tough to control the evil thoughts that seep in sometimes and you capture that struggle very well, Aaron...I think you answer your own question in your last stanza: hope!! Even a momentary surge of strength is enough to lift the veil of darkness and I believe you have it because you are already writing about it... well-done, my friend... i am rooting for you in this battle within the mind!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you FT... yes hope my friend :) I even have a bottle of holy water on my dresser since I thin.. read more
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Tee
Another brilliant piece, I especially love the first stanza!

Posted 2 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Tee :) Sometimes things just come out and so the thoughts started coming and th.. read more
Its dark, and i like it :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thanks IM... you already know my style :)
Dani The Unreviewed

2 Years Ago

Yup. And its great. :)
you are in a spiritual warfare,just rebuke the demon,pray for a hedge of protection around you
and plead the blood of jesus on your home and family.and if your not right with god,then get right

Posted 2 Years Ago


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AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

I am right with God buddy just gotta pray and get through the times. I think some of it has to do w.. read more
 wordman

2 Years Ago

if they are in the house they will attack you as well
I think many of us find our minds tipping us into thoughts that would otherwise be called 'madness'. Usually at times of threat or stress. I know I had murderous feelings towards my ex and her lover but wrote it out in a novel. You capture that struggle in this piece Aaron and it is told in a soulful voice of someone wanting to be released from such plaguing intrusive thoughts.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

You are right my friend... writing things out does definitely help... better than going all postal! .. read more
Interesting, I like the first and last stanzas the most.
Well played!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Bluefire :) Appreciate your feedback :)
Bluefire

2 Years Ago

No problem, sir Freitas
We leave our lasting impression
by defining the strength we find
even if only monetarily to fight
and destroy what is our fate.

This last stanza defines you better.
Great one friend.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Saddam :) Appreciate your feedback
You have a long time to define your strength and leave your lasting impression

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Raj... and that I will do :)

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