Without you

Without you

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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Watching one of my fav shows... wrote some stuff for fun

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This is probably a little past due,

but as I keep waiting for time

to heal these wounds… I only find

myself still missing you.

 

I know I was so far from perfect,

No matter how hard I tried…

I could never find happiness... yet it

kills when I see tears in your eyes.

 

I never wanted to hurt you,

Only a chance to love you.

But the harder I tried the 

farther away I pushed you.

 

Maybe I was never good enough.

 

So I found ways to cope and to

be happy momentarily… never

realizing the path of destruction

and heartbreak I would leave behind.

 

Maybe the world will be a better

place without me… I’ll never know.

What I do know is that I’ll never

be a better “me” without you.


© 2015 AaronFreitas



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Poignant piece. The pain and loss of relationship; something every human being experiences. Here you have captured its essence. The pleasure and pain, the truth and blame, elegantly written and evenly delivered. A wonderful poem from an excellent poet. Thank you for rr, and sharing your art.

Peace, Todd

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Todd... sorry for the late response haven't been on much buddy.



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Well penned and expressed!
Hang in there pal your special someone is
looking for you as well, all in due time!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you James... the right one will come along eventually. Patience is something I'm learning and.. read more
Nice review of a past life and you will find someone to make you better.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

I sure am hoping so Willard :) Maybe when we get our rain in Cali someone will wash in for me haha .. read more
Willard Wells

2 Years Ago

Keeping good thoughts for your future love.
Nicely said of a love that has its hurdles and the ropes you have to use to climb to the top!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Andrew. It's something a little different but I haven't written in a while so h.. read more
andrew mitchell

2 Years Ago

No probs I know!!!! you were stuck in Vegas!!!!. I won't tell anyone!!!!:) lol
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

haha I can only wish buddy!
This is lovely, Aaron. Love is tough sometimes...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Yeah sometimes it's great sometimes it's rough... but it always provides something to write about :).. read more
A wonderdul piece. Very emotional and letting go your loved ones. Especially if you know she's all that you need. I love the first part, Time heal wounds but in process you still miss someone.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Claudine :) They say time heals all wounds but maybe some wounds just never heal... appre.. read more
sometimes it`s just not the right chemistry,it`s not always our fault

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

You're right wordman... sometimes it just doesn't click... chemistry isn't there... can't fix that. .. read more
 wordman

2 Years Ago

my pleasure
awww, this is SUCH a touching poem, What woman wouldn't give a guy another chance after hearing this!?!?..I loved it!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much cutie :) Just some things that came to mind... appreciate your review :)
The twist and thoughts of life and relationships.
"What I do know is that I’ll never
be a better “me” without you."
The question of need and want can leave us wishing for better ending and possibility. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry my friend.
Coyote


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Coyote... yes there is much to think about when it comes to life and relationshi.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

My pleasure and you are welcome.

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