Last Dance

Last Dance

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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I’ve waited patiently all night,

Sedentary, admiring your beauty.

You’ve danced the night away…

But this last dance I saved for you.

 

Take my hand and just trust,

Trust and believe in this moment. 

My heart is empty - but truthfully,

That means I have more love to give.

 

A quick glance into your eyes…

Proof that true beauty still exists.

The touch of your sleek soft skin…

Too amazing for me to resist. 

 

I’ve been waiting for a woman like you,

To take my hand and fill my heart with love.

In this moment our souls align perfectly…

As if you’re an angel sent from above.

 

Our song ends and the warmth of your

Tender lips releases from my lips…

I watch as you gently walk away,

Glancing back… hoping I ask you to stay.

 

But I lingered quietly and watched my dreams fade,

A pure love is not destined for me.

I pushed away an angel packed with love,

And chose to stay heartbroken even in a dream.


© 2015 AaronFreitas



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One of my favorite Russian poets is Alexander Pushkin. Him being put into a Lyceum school turned him into a hopeless romantic. Although he certainly has his share of romantic poetry, and poetic fairy-tales (folktales, whatever you want to call them) I also admire his writing because of the fact that he really played around with rhythmic styles. Once you read one of his poems, it starts to flow in one way, and then the rhyming changes making it flow in a different way all of a sudden. This is what you have done here. And that is what makes the piece a lot of fun for me to read. I'm sorry it took me so long to finally read and review this piece. I'm only now getting close to reading through all of my read requests.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the compliment my friend :) I like to play with the stuff I write.... like to write the .. read more



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love and dreams seem to go together,our lives are wrapped up in it,great write

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you wordman.... you got that right. Sometimes our dreams ruin the love we have because in our.. read more
This is a sad but such well written piece of work my friend!
I can understand this situation for sure, (unfortunately)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

I knew you would be able to relate buddy... our day is coming and we will find someone that makes us.. read more
So sad, all those opportunities we should never have pushed away...
They haunt us, but hopefully not forever.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Very true... hopefully not forever :) Thanks for your comments :)
Aww, come on, the guy doesn´t even give himself an opportunity. This is very beautiful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

haha.... welcome to my world... someday he will give himself a chance :) Thanks for your review :)
Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

He should, and you're welcome.
It's lovely. But, boo!!! Missed opportunities...
This is very well written. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Matt... don't know what's up with my last two semi-love poems but it's nice to write and l.. read more

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