Apocalypse

Apocalypse

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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Just something totally off the wall for a contest... no offense to anyone just found a cool pic and came up with the idea.

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God said, “Please set fire…

To each living soul that’s sinned.”

He watched as we burned



© 2015 AaronFreitas



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Revelations 'number of the beast' often stirs my thoughts - perhaps it just a way of describing sinners who havent repented or have no intention of doing so. In which case this is totally step two.
Great bit of fantasy inspired by a very intriguing image. Nice exercise A.
Good luck in the contest :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you ANTO... it was fun and a different perspective on the belief our savior will return to Ear.. read more



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That's like a nice slap in the face. Very effective!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Honest and direct words my friend. Few people are walking the right path. Thank you Aaron for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


the spiritual strength of gods power some times is not apreciated

Posted 1 Year Ago


Hey ! It was really a nice piece of writing...I do agree with you that he who have created us has the divine power to finish our lives...
Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you riddhi... this one was a little different but I'm glad you liked it.
He created and set us up in a way that we could be knocked down, out of a job otherwise.

I'm a believer though. There just has to be a higher hand at work because warts and all, it all works too well to be just co-incidence.

T

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

I agree completely... there has to be and I am a believe :) Thanks for your feedback :)
this is an eye opener my friend

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you :) I actually won an award for it :)
 wordman

1 Year Ago

well i can see why !
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I'm sorry Aaron, I'm not religious, so I don't have a comment for this

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

It's all good... still the thought of you commenting and reading makes me appreciate you :)
not offensive at all. There is no one who hasn't sinned and for me the fire was of his burning love.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Thank you Patricia :) I am glad you found the intended meaning in the words :) Appreciate your com.. read more
Any time in life, anyone is able to sin. Be it they are religious or not. Some deserve to burn for their sins, while many don't deserve that...the picture helps envision this piece more. Great write!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

The picture is what really puts it all into perspective... appreciate your review :) I haven't seen.. read more
I Am Svetlana

2 Years Ago

I know, I miss being on here and reviewing everyone's stuff! I've just been so busy with work lately.. read more
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

Understandable my friend :)
Reckon he'd say "Please"....?

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

He just might :) haha

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