Just a feeling

Just a feeling

A Poem by AaronFreitas

The taste of your skin 

explodes 

passion into my heart.  

 

The touch of your body

launches 

my mind into a fanatical eruption.  

 

Indescribable 

is the sensation 

of being with you, 

knowing

only a miracle from God himself

can guide you to me

as if it was destiny.  

 

I feel as if I’m walking through heaven

and you’re behind a half open door… 

teasing me 

with the angel I am missing out on. 

 

Unlike any emotion I have ever felt before,

Your inner beauty 

brings me to my knees, 

begging God please, 

to let me explore 

a world of ecstasy with you- 

who brings upon me

an epiphany of the reality of my destiny;

just guide you to me. 

 

I do not want to go on living 

this way, 

knowing that I could

fill your heart

with love for eternity.

And even though you have love,

I find you here

with me.

On my mind

in my heart 

I’m attached emotionally.  

 

What am I to do

with this feeling 

I have no control of?  

Should I 

fade

before your eyes; 

leave you to be?

 

Or should I take this chance

and trust that you will see……


© 2015 AaronFreitas



Author's Note

AaronFreitas
This is a piece I wrote in December of 08... wish I remembered who it was about!
Edited to a format which I like much better than the free write I had. Thanks to Jan aka JayceeC :)

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This was really good, and full of true emotion, not just words. You wrote in a way that allows the reader to experience the feeling the speaker is experiencing as well, and that is a quality not many writers have, but all need so desperately.
Wonderful job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much for the review and the compliments Anne :) I appreciate it very much :)



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This poem has tons of different feelings and emotions in it.
I guess that's the reason why the title is just a feeling.
This was quite a romantic write, tells such a story.
Its filled with such longing and was very deep indeed.
Seems pretty deep and meaningful for you to not remember who it was about.
Girl seems like she was a goddess to you haha.
Great write :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Very good. I liked it speaks to me

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is so so beautiful Aaron, worth re-reading and re-reading, I like like like..such a piece of poetry gives me a lot of inspiration, it is like you have removed words inside that could not come out

Posted 1 Year Ago


That's the beauty of love, not having any control over what we feel. Yet, it's utterly revolting of how we can feel such things without having knowledge of what they really mean. I feel that love means we feel without knowing. We see a rainbow & Devils flames within the same week. Love can turn our emotions so upside down that we can barely recognize ourselves, but that's the beauty of it all...the power of love makes us feel every single bit & color of emotion we ever imagined! We can feel so happy, yet so angry at the same time. How is that possible? No one knows...but it is. It happens. It's love & we just gotta work best with what we've got. With it comes to love, we can't control what type of emotion we feel. Scary. But true.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This piece is very impressive. One of the most heart-touching and romantic poems I've ever read. It's very moving. You can feel the emotions in each word. I can almost remember how it feels to fall in-love again. haha I enjoyed reading this. Love the Author's Note.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Love this piece bro, how could you not remember who you wrote this for??? haha
Jan's awesome!

Posted 1 Year Ago


this nice very nice the softness the caring the love the tenderness
the details how luck the miracle that you have in your world

Posted 1 Year Ago


Take the chance because this word called "trust" has always served as an obstacle during such do or die moments. I think some things and notions should be discarded completely when it comes to such moments of ecstasy.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your review my friend... sorry it took so long to get back to you :)
Great work....
I liked the way you carved your feelings in this poem...
Eager to read your next writing...
Keep on writing..
Thanks for sharing...
Riddhi

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much my friend for your reviews :) I haven't been on hardly at all but I owe you big.. read more
Aaron this is stunning
the most romantic piece i have come across
this longing is just pure bliss

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you RiverSided :) I would love to write more romantic pieces but unfortunately I haven't been.. read more

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