Just a feeling

Just a feeling

A Poem by AaronFreitas

The taste of your skin 

explodes 

passion into my heart.  

 

The touch of your body

launches 

my mind into a fanatical eruption.  

 

Indescribable 

is the sensation 

of being with you, 

knowing

only a miracle from God himself

can guide you to me

as if it was destiny.  

 

I feel as if I’m walking through heaven

and you’re behind a half open door… 

teasing me 

with the angel I am missing out on. 

 

Unlike any emotion I have ever felt before,

Your inner beauty 

brings me to my knees, 

begging God please, 

to let me explore 

a world of ecstasy with you- 

who brings upon me

an epiphany of the reality of my destiny;

just guide you to me. 

 

I do not want to go on living 

this way, 

knowing that I could

fill your heart

with love for eternity.

And even though you have love,

I find you here

with me.

On my mind

in my heart 

I’m attached emotionally.  

 

What am I to do

with this feeling 

I have no control of?  

Should I 

fade

before your eyes; 

leave you to be?

 

Or should I take this chance

and trust that you will see……


© 2015 AaronFreitas



Author's Note

AaronFreitas
This is a piece I wrote in December of 08... wish I remembered who it was about!
Edited to a format which I like much better than the free write I had. Thanks to Jan aka JayceeC :)

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This was really good, and full of true emotion, not just words. You wrote in a way that allows the reader to experience the feeling the speaker is experiencing as well, and that is a quality not many writers have, but all need so desperately.
Wonderful job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much for the review and the compliments Anne :) I appreciate it very much :)



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The passion of love and lust burning in the readers eye. Well written Arron

Posted 1 Year Ago


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AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much Terrance :)
This was really good, and full of true emotion, not just words. You wrote in a way that allows the reader to experience the feeling the speaker is experiencing as well, and that is a quality not many writers have, but all need so desperately.
Wonderful job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much for the review and the compliments Anne :) I appreciate it very much :)
This is...."DEEP" *catches breath* AMAZING can not describe how beautiful this piece is. Full ratings.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much CiNtsaLis :) I definitely appreciate your kind words and rating :)
CiNtsaLis

1 Year Ago

You're most welcomed (:
I absolutely love the feeling of love and passion I get from this! always loving your poetry Aaron, and it seems that you've been a great writer for a while. Keep up the good work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much Kuma :) I want to focus more on pieces like this so we will see :) Haven't see.. read more
Kuma

1 Year Ago

Yeah, havent written in a while, been kinda in a slump but back now and hopefully gonna post more fr.. read more
AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

I hope so... if so send me RR's :) I'm super behind but hopefully I'll come back more :)
wow, this is incredible, I really love it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you Connie... it's a different type of write for me but I'm hoping to channel some of these ro.. read more
Lol maybe it was about someone you saw in your dreams, or someone you meet in the future.
So full of passion, though! So well written! I seriously thought of such an amazing woman.
Thanks for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

It is definitely possible :) I appreciate your kind words Bluefire :) Thank you!
Bluefire

2 Months Ago

You're welcome
Passionate and enveloping. A great romantic write. Aaron:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you Pryde... a different side of me :)
A very beautiful poem. like it :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you irenic :) It's been a long time since I've see you on here :)
irenic

1 Year Ago

welcome and yeah I have visited on it after a long time :) thank you :)
Beautiful and mesmerizing!
You must have liked her really very much!
Imagery, flow and plot are all very well framed and penned.
Loved it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much Jyoti :) I believe I did... and if I now remember who it was nothing came of it.. read more
This is magnificent. Intense emotions portrayed in the form of words.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you Blackheart :)

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