Reality

Reality

A Poem by AaronFreitas
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Just some stuff I wrote and decided to share since it's been forever!

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I try to pick up the pieces of my shattered heart left crumbled on the ground but defeat starts to set into my mind. Emptiness is a feeling all too familiar as I lay here and contemplate what the rest of my life without love would feel like. Nearly two years have passed and women come and go... not one has chosen to stay and accept the love I have to give. On the other hand, maybe they see that this heart is empty and while I lay here believing in what I have to offer, the women of the past see that there's nothing left. No love, no compassion and no reason to love me. I lay alone without a tear in my eye, without an ache in my heart. Yet, I caress a crack in my soul as the pain and hurt from life without love is beyond affecting the body I reside in. It's much deeper than that now. It's taking a slow, torturing toll on my soul that will last eternity. An emptiness and loneliness that bruises the very thought of my own existence to a point of feeling completely gone from life as we know. Yet, I stop to think that it's still just me laying alone in this bed. At least I have me.



© 2016 AaronFreitas



Author's Note

AaronFreitas
Doesn't really fit a category but I have all these things I've written and haven't shared... decided to share this piece that I wrote in bed last night.

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An interesting write caught between an itch you cannot scratch, a hunger that won't go away and maybe just maybe,slow down and let love come to you, its all about being out there socially and something happens when you least expect it. apart from that i feel your pain. Hi Aaron hope all is well.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

are you mocking my reviews kwp.:)
KWP

1 Year Ago

no way ... I was just hoping for a full meal ... LOVE X
AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

It definitely does have a way of creeping up on you when you least expect it! I blame it on the col.. read more



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first of all.........glad to read you again.
its sad..........i can relate to it........m not in a great place either.......so i am not gonna say that it gets better..........but, i will say this, hold on........till its gets better.......
you have the right kind of attitude.......you have got yourself, and almost always.......that is enough.
good luck man!
keep writing......
this was great!
:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is so descriptive Aaron, its been a long time and am sure you already got a lady who accepted that love that you had to offer

Posted 1 Year Ago


thats all that matters and you sharing them is appreciated , stay on it and dont hold back , its a good start and only gets better with time , I have been there so I can relate to your pain

Posted 1 Year Ago


I won't offer the clichè words of what may come. But I will say, this pain isn't for naught don't be in such a rush to give others love, but instead give yourself the love you wish to give others. It's still clichè but you'll get everything you deserve eventually. It's a romantically sad piece, and wonderfully written. I love taking a walk in someone else's consciousness, the thoughts they think late at night. the one's that keep them up at night, the one's they spend hours contemplating the ones that flit through their mind gone as fast as they came. Just to understand their struggles and take a glimpse of the world through their eyes. If only for a moment that is all I ask. Thank you

Posted 1 Year Ago


but one day she will come along and rock your world,no more tears,no more being alone

Posted 1 Year Ago


Awesome piece! The emotion really comes through in this!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Nice paragraph, you could easily expand on this listing the events and reasons behind the strong emotions you have mentioned. Masterfully written. I can feel the agony in your words, it even forced me to search my own soul and reflect on my losses that have left me to feel the loneleness of time. Very powerful my friend, five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Love is a many splendid thing, at least you have you.
I missed your writings old friend, much obliged
For your artistic views. Thanks EG.;)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thanks E G.. I've been kind of distant from the site.. no particular reason. I spent time really wor.. read more
Love is my favorite four letter word! It does have a way of sneaking up on you when you least expect it, so maybe that little guy with the arrows is giving you some time to just be good to yourself for a change! I believe it will happen...just wait and see!

; )

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

I read your first line and I want to write something with that line :) It definitely does creep up .. read more
Kelly Scheppers

1 Year Ago

...send it to me when you write it, ok?
It will happen. The chance will be. The door will open. The sun will shine. Keep it natural and don't try to force things and it will come to pass. Keep giving love and smiles even to the end...Glad you are sharing...:)................

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AaronFreitas

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much Sami for the review and advice... sometimes we know it but we need to hear it ag.. read more
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome muchly...:)........................

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