In Your Extravagance

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Secrets only you can give

where dreams and dragons fiercely live…

  

Every whispered strain of you

is extravagance in their brilliant hues…

 

Invite us in to take a seat

to taste your bitter and your sweet…

 

For you are unquenchable fires

yielding yourself in ravenous desires…

 

Gilded treasures held within

now locked away in your softing skin…

 

My fingers caress your key

please yield your sweet world to me…

Reviews

[Chris G. Vaillancourt]

This is beautifully worded. Great write

[Keegan D'souza]

I feel like i'm at "the tea party" and the hatter is luring me into these carnal desires, to reveal my inner most deepest darkest secrets and spill my plate with imagination. Great Write, amazing,amazing,amazing! loved it.

[Samuel Dickens]

I want to join in that tea party, as long as I get to keep my head.

[Bette]

Very inviting, tasteful and beautiful well done Craig.

[Aaran]

This is so brilliant... A wish to delve deep into the secrets of a beloved who holds them close to her heart... Desire to demystify the unknown.. Your poem instills a life in that wish that reverberates in your readers' heart... Loved it :)

[no sun]

Well Mr Romantic this will do nothing to tarnish your reputation. I enjoy your writes, they are easy to breathe in.

[i-human]

Alluring

[rnuff]

Such a sweet magniff write, that is sincere and beautiful.

[Star Wolf]

A mystery for the taking if one can just find the way. A beautiful and vivid poem. Awesome, really.

[Abd-afeez]

wow! I love this poem, every of the lines are nothing but powerful. Especially as the every line i read stocked vivid onto my mind. I love the introductory line most, it made me picture the fancy world in our dreams. How it immerse our emotions with existence and the ensuing charade is just what we never want to end. This poem is short but powerful, thank you for letting us cup out a quenching taste out of your bardy stream.