FOR YOU LIKE THE SUN

FOR YOU LIKE THE SUN

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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I want to be for you like the sun on winter’s snow...

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I want to be for you like the sun on winter’s snow... melting you... transforming you into raging rivers... torrents of spring’s song... a wild fury of crystalline light in trembling, tumbling energy... awakened and unleashed to wonder's land... for you are anything but commonplace... a liquid lit desire only sleeping... when I see the world illumined in your eyes... I burn as the fires of a thousand daybreaks... shattering the powerless fragrance of night within... gaze at me now... let me become for you like the sun... 



© 2014 An owl on the moon



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..... wow!!! This is Beautiful.....😊

Posted 2 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Months Ago

Ah, thank you dear Saumya! So glad you were by. :)
Saumya

2 Months Ago

You're welcome!😊
One of the most beautiful romantic poems !
Thank you for sharing this :)!

Posted 5 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

4 Months Ago

I so deeply appreciate your kindness and presence in my world... :)
Soft, gentle and powerful use of words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


This is sweet and very romantic. Valentine

Posted 12 Months Ago


when I see the world illumined in your eyes... I burn as the fires of a thousand daybreaks... shattering the powerless fragrance of night within... gaze at me now... let me become for you like the sun... .... our loved ones are our Sun....it's only their light that shines upon our life's.... I like the way you paint your love into her.....the sunshine filling her with brightness .... I always tell my love that he is the sun of my life and am his moon surviving on his light.... this poetry resonates with me at a very deep level.... happy to read this one....

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

I so deeply appreciate your warm thoughts and light here, Ria. My words are more reflections and rem.. read more
"I want to be for you like the sun on winter’s snow..."
The imagery's full of love. Very philosophical writes you do write. Enjoyed reading your work. I love the scenes you've plotted in this write... 'bout "sun" (you) and "winter" (your love). Seemed like a romantic-lullaby. Well penned.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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To have someone that wants to be like the sun that breaks the cold spells.. who would not want that? Great write!!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much for stopping by, moonskittles! Appreciate your encouragement... :)
Oh yeah, MUCHLY!! Craig, beautiful, vivid imagery here. Who needs to say alot of words when you can say so much more in a few. Wonderfully done. Thank you for sharing your heart.

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

Thank you, sweet friend! Good to have you by again... Why, you're one of the reasons I stayed here... read more
Wow... just wow.
The first poem I read here and it is so AMAZING. Thank you for sharing a talent as wonderful with us.
This was truely WOW!

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

AnneMarie, thank you so much! I deeply appreciate your presence.. and your kindness... Happy new ye.. read more

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Welcome to my page of poetry... May you find peace and inspiration... Craig "We don't read and write poetry because it's cute. We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And.. more..

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