I remember no world

I remember no world

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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Only an empty void...

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I remember no world

Before her shadow on my skin

Only chaos

Only an empty void

And then she came

In poetry and prose

Etched sunrise ink

Across my soul

Aroused was the scent of her sea

The shores of her rivers

Ancient, mystic waters

Carrying me to raven calls

For moments our flames ignited

Flowed fierce into one

Our fragile flaws

Melted into the pleasure of Being

Before her loving goodbye

Brought a desolation

I could not comprehend

Reminded me of the universe

In its unborn nothingness

She asked me once

If I believed in miracles

And I know I must

Waking every dawn

Clinging to the hope of seeing

The Wonderland of her smile…


© 2015 An owl on the moon



Author's Note

An owl on the moon
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Oh , so sadly beautiful. The opening lines were pure magic and then the loss , so melancholic...

lovely poetry :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Months Ago

We often find ourselves praying for memories to come live again in us, though the days so often stea.. read more
Excellent poem Froman. I can sense the feeling of love as I read this one, as if I am there. Amazing :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

I truly appreciate your kindness... yes... one person can be the sunrise of your soul...
And then she came, In poetry and prose, Etched sunrise ink, Across my soul...
Deep imagery you've dappled on the poetic-page. After reading your work, I say, "The reason of poetry belongs to her." I like the imagery of fantasy & destiny you've created through the vibes of your thought invoking words.

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for stopping here to share your insights, Adams... Looking forward to reading more.. read more
.. 'Etched sunrise ink - Across my soul - Aroused was the scent of her sea - The shores of her rivers.. '

There's such a mix of pain and perfection in this poem, Craig. The joyful memory of what was wonderful seems almost untarnished until that 'goodbye' which could near shatter a heart, your heart. And yet.. those final lines display an undiminished and determined need to fulfil your dreams. Dream on. There's a magic and very lovely spell here.

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

I so deeply appreciate your words, emma... your warm thoughts and wishes... Yes.. sometimes beautifu.. read more
emmajoy

2 Years Ago

My pleasure. Thank you and the warmest Spring wishes to you and your family.
Beautifully conveyed , lyrical write full of romance.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Crag...Reading you is always a beautiful and breathtaking moment for me. You create sheer magic with your feelings. The emotions flows with such passion and spontaneity. From the cold, dark void, to the burning fierce passion, to the inevitable goodbye of love and yet the undying faith in a miracle. You tell a story of love, in an amazing way only you can.

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Divya... you seemed to read every line so clearly... and all the spaces in betwee.. read more
DIVYA

2 Years Ago

Knowing you, I am sure, and I know the miracles will happen. Those are beautiful spaces in where we .. read more
An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

I deeply appreciate your blessed words.. much needed today...
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I know what it's like to be out of it, but this is what you make of it, my dear poet. Your language is deep emotion that pours out of you like a magnificent waterfall

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

Good to see you here, lynn! I am finding... more each day... that the poetry is writing me now... Ha.. read more
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2 Years Ago

Symbiosis at it's best :)
Well written and executed! Very fine lines deep sentiment and terrific imagery,
the picture only adds to an already beautiful piece of work. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed.

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

It's always a blessing to have you by, Jamestown! Thank you...
A beautiful piece. It just shows that after love there is no going back. Love changes everything and makes anything we had experienced before it seem meaningless.
An excellent piece of poetry. Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, AnneMarie... You saw so very well into my words.. painted with my soul's ever-alt.. read more
This is beautiful. Written so well, I was surprise at the flow of some of the lines. One of the nicest I have read in some time. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago



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