A WONDERLAND WITHIN

A WONDERLAND WITHIN

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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So many perceive only surfaces...

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So many perceive only surfaces

only skin…

but she is a Wonderland within.

 

Chrysalis tea with a hatter’s cup

and more…

inside her live ten thousand doors.

 

Red queen, white queen shadowed

stormy cries…

she feeds me bread and butterflies.

 

A vast expanse of tranquil space

this etched ink…

dancing now through her folds of pink.       

 

We play in her gardens of delight

by roses red…

wildflowers make our untamed bed.

 

Drink me now and eat me more

always new…

She is the shade of indigo blue.


© 2015 An owl on the moon



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Chrysalis tea with a hatter’s cup
and more…
inside her live ten thousand doors.

WOW! quite imagery you paint, I can sense a longing in your words.
I can also feel some passion through out this write.
I like this write, You hold a talented a pen, my friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


This might just be me, because i personally believe , that there are many sides to a woman and you know slowly uncovering these layers are a joy. There is something unique about everybody, one must take time to understand and be patient as one uncovers the mystery and finds that uniqueness in the end. As usual your words end up drawing such vivid images in my mind. And your arrangement is as usual superb. But i personally felt i was envisioning what i stated above. I might be wrong but that's how i see it ^^

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

So true, my friend. That is what love can reveal, those deeper places of the mind and heart. Thank y.. read more
I love the rhyming lines and the awesome sweet images. Beautiful words, marvellous flow. Just a really nice poem to read. But I think, I enjoy reading your writings in general. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

You always make me smile, dear poet. Thank you for your kindness! :)
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1 Year Ago

You're welcome. Your kind reviews make me sort of happy, too. :)
Chrysalis tea with a hatter’s cup
and more…
inside her live ten thousand doors.

Really love those lines, I find them deep, as well as metaphoric. Love your writing style.


Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

You are such a joyful presence. Thank you so much. Making my day. :)
So much magic! the images that you can paint in one's mind, I envy you! I love the ABB format, short and sweet middle line. Very beautiful flow to it. makes me miss her

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

Thank you dear poet. I miss her too.
I liked this this was good

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Isabelle. :)
Awesome imagery in this. You writing is always amazing to read . Great job

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

Always so good to have you come by, Sean! Hope all is well in your world. :)
Sean M. Addams

2 Years Ago

It good happy to be writing again must be something about October that inspires me :)
Sean M. Addams

2 Years Ago

It's good happy to be writing again must be something about October that inspires me :)
Absolutely stunning dear poet😊

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

I so appreciate you, Priscilla. :)
great title! This was a delight to read..made me sigh, laugh and feel. There are many colors within and colors do hold certain energies and you captured it all so beautifully..

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

Thank you, dear Sue! It's always a sweet joy to have you come by to read. :)
Great title, A Wonderland Within. Fascination with a woman put into strong wording. So much more to see than surface.

Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

2 Years Ago

Thank you Philip! So hope your week is filling you with inspiration.

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