We sail across halcyon seas

We sail across halcyon seas

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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How thin that veil

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Hold your hand up to mine

Palm to palm

The thin veil between

This brief temporal world

And the eternal

Is smaller than the space

Between our hands

How thin that veil

And how seldom we realize it

Our hope cannot be shaken

By the horrors of this world

For we sail across halcyon seas...

© 2015 An owl on the moon


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An owl on the moon
“The heart knows a thousand ways to speak” - Rumi

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So elegant and vivid in emotion, this song of hope, dear poet/ Wonderful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Dear lynn, thank you! Based on a true story, though it's currently covered in mist. :)
Very nice poem of hope. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Willard. May you find hope all around.
Such a lovely and hopeful poem. You have crafted something wonderful here with your words. I deeply enjoyed reading this. Hope is everything. Hope is all.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Thank you, dear poet. Yes, learning to find hope in the darkness, awaiting the beauty of dawn.
Miss Owl

8 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Quite beautifully penned; and I have never read a more lyrical depiction of that 'thin veil,' twixt the temporal and the eternal.

Long may you sail across halcyon seas. T

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

How I appreciate your kind words and your dear wishes. Sailing and smiling even now across those ble.. read more
I am awestruck, Craig!
This is such a beautiful poem!
Full of hope and spirit to live!
Loved the imagery.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Thank you, dear Jyoti! May those seeds of hope ever grow deep roots in the wondrous garden of you. :.. read more
Jyoti_Ablaze

8 Years Ago

My pleasure!
You always write with such an elegant style. It's always filled with creative imagination and hope.

Excellent writing Craig.

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

I so deeply appreciate your kindness, Relic. Wishing you such joy in this week. :)
Hope's, of course, one thing that one needs to walk the life - the whole endorsements of nights.Very poetically you depict the moments - the wondering's - of "moments" one's being stuck in & having struggles to wave such darkness. Nice flow of ink!

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Ah, Adams, it's so true. Thank you! Hope is the thread I cling to for a dream's fabric yet unwoven. .. read more
oh so beautiful!! Superb use of image, brilliantly crafted. The photo is beautiful also!

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Your words are so uplifting. Thank you, my friend!
Loved the flow and feel of this write. lovely word choices set a wonderful mood. Excellent!

Posted 8 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

Thank you, dear poet. May your week bring you endless inspiration. :)

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