Into the midnight of you

Into the midnight of you

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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In this storm of distant recollections

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In this storm of distant recollections

how I wish for light

to pour over you like endless rain

dripping over your soft skin

your loving soul

your restless, wild wings

for you are love to me

and I remember how

she placed you on my path

the angel with no name

who will always be with us

and I only ever want more of you

the day and night of your whispered world

until I can make love to your darkness

and transform it into dawn

kiss me into the midnight of you

let me become your moon and stars

breathe and be with me

just be.

© 2016 An owl on the moon


Author's Note

An owl on the moon
I searched for the fabric of my soul, and found you woven into every fiber of me. - O

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The visualization in this poem is breathtaking. I am not sure I can find the words for this piece. It is beautiful and moves with softness. I am not sure that makes sense, but that is what it did to me.



Posted 6 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

6 Years Ago

I so deeply appreciate your thoughts, dear poet. This was from a secret place in me that is so dista.. read more
she placed you on my path
the angel with no name
who will always be with us
and I only ever want more of you
MY FAVORITE PORTION FROM YOUR PIECE, AN ANGEL WITH NO NAME...WOW ! BEAUTIFUL

Posted 7 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

7 Years Ago

Your words bring such joy! I deeply appreciate your kindness here. :)
Cfroman,
"Into the midnight of you" was so transparent in its portrayal of the layers of dark and light within your heart towards another heart. Relationships are many times complex of memory- of expectations met and not. Love is the softening factor in how you drew so exactly what and how the angel of love placed intent of feeling to the subject of your heart. I would love to hear just the idea-person? behind this particular amazing poem although the writer's not was probably enough of an explanation. But if you would like to explain a little more.........hint, hint. Just loved it!! Blessings in your amazing writing life, Never stop for you have a wonderful gift. Kathy

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kathy Van Kurin

7 Years Ago

Cfroman,
Okay now,that really helps me to see from your vantage point. "dawn of twin flame pa.. read more
An owl on the moon

7 Years Ago

You understand so well. Yes, Kathy, it is a truly healing process. May it bring you much joy and pea.. read more
Kathy Van Kurin

7 Years Ago

It's neat to find commonality and I will never tire of these connections of understanding with other.. read more
Precious are these moments for those lucky enough to have found this. Valentine

Posted 7 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

7 Years Ago

Yes, and even on this journey home there is joy in the midnight. Thank you dear poet.
The light of love never dying...Dawn so near heaven....

Posted 7 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

7 Years Ago

Dear Queenie, sometimes I wonder if dawn has forgotten me. Thank you for shining your light here.
such a wonderful, beautiful write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Transcendental love. Beautiful...

Posted 7 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

7 Years Ago

Muito obrigado, amiga... abraço.
I am breathless reading your work. Literally and emotionally. Beautiful, deeply raw.

Posted 7 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear poet. Sometimes my autobiography bleeds a little beauty.
Beautiful and delicately told , such inspirational lovely romantic write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

7 Years Ago

I so appreciate your kindness, MOON.
This is a graceful & original love poem! I embrace your lyrical dance between light & dark . . . tho a much-used theme, you've managed to impart it in a fresh way here. Your word crafting flows extremely well. Too many good parts to point out my faves! (((HUGS)))

Posted 7 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

7 Years Ago

I appreciate your kind words so much! My poetry has all turned to autobiography, so I seem to live .. read more
barleygirl

7 Years Ago

Some of the best words of wisdom for writers: Write what we know. I've found that I get few fans whe.. read more
An owl on the moon

7 Years Ago

Ahhhh, look at you go! Keep being you. :)

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