Into the midnight of you

Into the midnight of you

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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In this storm of distant recollections

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In this storm of distant recollections

how I wish for light

to pour over you like endless rain

dripping over your soft skin

your loving soul

your restless, wild wings

for you are love to me

and I remember how

she placed you on my path

the angel with no name

who will always be with us

and I only ever want more of you

the day and night of your whispered world

until I can make love to your darkness

and transform it into dawn

kiss me into the midnight of you

let me become your moon and stars

breathe and be with me

just be.


© 2016 An owl on the moon



Author's Note

An owl on the moon
I searched for the fabric of my soul, and found you woven into every fiber of me. - O

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Beautifully written.....The absence of capital letters and punctuation creates a flow - a flurry of emotion which would have been hampered by literary convention.

Considering the usual "original" expressions I have come to expect from you, the line "let me become your moon and stars" somehow did not give me the finale the lines prior to that predicted.

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your lifting words and your beautiful honesty. May your new week bring you end.. read more
Sigh...this is gorgeous...the metaphor binding the adoration well and the sensual love expressed is but a jewel in the sand...lovely hon :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Poppy! Maybe Love is all that really exists, and everything else is just a mirage.
Poppy Ruth Silver

1 Year Ago

I would definitely agree with that hon...always my pleasure x
Wow, i am all for feelings, and this sir was enchanting and the feelings rained all over me. Loved it, definitely reading it from time to time. ^^

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

I so deeply appreciate your comments, Errenn. Sometimes the brightest beauty flows through the darke.. read more
Érenn

1 Year Ago

So true ^^
wowww amazing one...... so enchanting...
enjoyed !!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Very thankful you came by! May you find endless enchantment over your weekend. :)
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Wow, I forgot just how much I love your poetry... How could I right?! ;)

"Until I can make love to your darkness
And transform it into dawn"

Such a beautiful romantic line. This entire poem is laced with a dreamy heartfelt wish to love, deeply, intensely... So completely that it transforms not only darkness into a beautiful ribbon of light and color... But it transforms the heart. Absolutely gorgeous, my friend, but what else did I expect? Lol

So good to see you're still spilling love and beauty onto the page! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Dear Kalypso! You must know this place is never the same when you're away. Your enchanted voice belo.. read more
Wow... Romantically enchanting words!
Loved the piece absolutely.
Read it over n over!
Very well done! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, dear Jyoti! Your encouragement means more than I can possibly say. :)
Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

My pleasure! :D
Everything about this poem is amazing, so beautiful and romantic. Your skills shine brightly in the write. I think it is so outstanding.

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

You are so kind, precious poet. I give all credit to my muse, who is pure magic. :)
Miss Owl

1 Year Ago

You are very very welcome.
A brilliant write. So tender, so romantic and all consuming but in a soft loving way. Your words reflect so beautifully wonderful love can be. This is such a lovely poem how I do love it!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Thank you, dear poet! This flows from the deepest place in me. So glad you connected to it. :)
Coyote Song

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome.
you got the style,
not just for a while,,,
your writing reflects a light,
which will ever brighten your every night....
great poem C Froman.....

Posted 1 Year Ago


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An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Ah, thou brilliance is wondrous to see! Thank you, thank you for being thee! :)
very beautifully expressed like a painting being made you make the reader paint away into imagination, you add your own charm to the poems :)
love reading your work ...

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Dear Ria, thank you for commenting. Your words lifted me today. :)
Galadriel

1 Year Ago

am glad to know.. :)

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