Into the midnight of you

In this storm of distant recollections

how I wish for light

to pour over you like endless rain

dripping over your soft skin

your loving soul

your restless, wild wings

for you are love to me

and I remember how

she placed you on my path

the angel with no name

who will always be with us

and I only ever want more of you

the day and night of your whispered world

until I can make love to your darkness

and transform it into dawn

kiss me into the midnight of you

let me become your moon and stars

breathe and be with me

just be.

Author's Note

I searched for the fabric of my soul, and found you woven into every fiber of me. - O

Reviews

[Jess]

Enchanting indeed!!
I like the imagery :)

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much, Jess! So good to have you here now! :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Beautifully written.....The absence of capital letters and punctuation creates a flow - a flurry of emotion which would have been hampered by literary convention.

Considering the usual "original" expressions I have come to expect from you, the line "let me become your moon and stars" somehow did not give me the finale the lines prior to that predicted.

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much for your lifting words and your beautiful honesty. May your new week bring you endless blessings.

[Ruth]

Sigh...this is gorgeous...the metaphor binding the adoration well and the sensual love expressed is but a jewel in the sand...lovely hon :)

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you, Poppy! Maybe Love is all that really exists, and everything else is just a mirage.

[Ruth]

I would definitely agree with that hon...always my pleasure x

[Érenn]

Wow, i am all for feelings, and this sir was enchanting and the feelings rained all over me. Loved it, definitely reading it from time to time. ^^

[An owl on the moon]

I so deeply appreciate your comments, Errenn. Sometimes the brightest beauty flows through the darkest of nights.

[Érenn]

So true ^^

[Lily Finch]

wowww amazing one...... so enchanting...
enjoyed !!!

[An owl on the moon]

Very thankful you came by! May you find endless enchantment over your weekend. :)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Wow, I forgot just how much I love your poetry... How could I right?! ;)

"Until I can make love to your darkness
And transform it into dawn"

Such a beautiful romantic line. This entire poem is laced with a dreamy heartfelt wish to love, deeply, intensely... So completely that it transforms not only darkness into a beautiful ribbon of light and color... But it transforms the heart. Absolutely gorgeous, my friend, but what else did I expect? Lol

So good to see you're still spilling love and beauty onto the page! :)

[An owl on the moon]

Dear Kalypso! You must know this place is never the same when you're away. Your enchanted voice belongs here. Thank you for whispering such wondrous light over my dark world. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Wow... Romantically enchanting words!
Loved the piece absolutely.
Read it over n over!
Very well done! :)

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much, dear Jyoti! Your encouragement means more than I can possibly say. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

My pleasure! :D

[Miss Owl]

Everything about this poem is amazing, so beautiful and romantic. Your skills shine brightly in the write. I think it is so outstanding.

[An owl on the moon]

You are so kind, precious poet. I give all credit to my muse, who is pure magic. :)

[Miss Owl]

You are very very welcome.

[Coyote Song]

A brilliant write. So tender, so romantic and all consuming but in a soft loving way. Your words reflect so beautifully wonderful love can be. This is such a lovely poem how I do love it!!!

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you, dear poet! This flows from the deepest place in me. So glad you connected to it. :)

[Coyote Song]

You're very welcome.

[gunjan]

you got the style,
not just for a while,,,
your writing reflects a light,
which will ever brighten your every night....
great poem C Froman.....

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, thou brilliance is wondrous to see! Thank you, thank you for being thee! :)