This wildness of winter waiting

I remember summer’s sorcery

Melodious fields of fire

When yesterday was a seed

Tendrils weaving, wrapping through me

Wildness in the roots dancing

In the ancient reflections of you

This mirage of magic

On candlelit garments of gold

As the oil and incense were burning

Continual prayers to heaven

And clouded gates led to

Those gardens of delight

Meadows of desire

Where you placed a seal on my heart

The mark of your name

In the sacred chambers of my soul

You lifted the veil

The mask of me

And gave me a cup to drink

Taking me to a silver slumber in shadows

But the waves came by night

And carried me far from your eyes

I woke in this nightmare called Distance

Saw that vessels crossing the sea leave no trail

For you to follow home to me

I live now in winter

This wildness of winter waiting

Immersed in snow

I live in winter

And yet I live

For seasons are not stone

They are alive in me

With all the echoes of you. 

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Multi layered poetry....with a hint of mystery that leaves the reader wanting more. Phrases like, "silver slumber" and "meadows of desire" are just gloriously romantic. When someone can remove your mask and see every side of you, they become part of your life forever....even if they are physically gone. Romantic loveliness. Lydi**

[An owl on the moon]

You read into the depth of these dark thoughts so well, Lydi. Thank you, dear poet.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"But the waves came by night
And carried me far from your eyes"

mysterious lines - what caused you to be separated from your miss? such mystery also reflects how romance ends unexpectedly

[An owl on the moon]

I appreciate your insights, dear Cascara. You see into those deeper places. Life seems to unfold mysteries so often, only to have them unveil more mystery underneath. Endless wrapping and unwrapping of the world.

[emmajoy]

You've always displayed a heart as big as a planet, and of all colours, and temperatures.. and, this is yet another - and beautiful. Seems your thoughts adventure a specific journey, Craig.. May it be safe and, more so, -happily reach its destination!

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much, Emma. Yes, when the winter thaw breaks up the ice, perhaps I shall journey forth and see what adventures await. Wishing you tantalizing travels too! :)

[emmajoy]

Am I allowed to say: I wish! Tis always a pleasure to read your posts, colour, emotion and all, Craig.

[V]

Again, a magical and enchanting choice of words for your piece of poetry. It leads the reader into another world, somewhere your mind is able to float and forget about the sober reality. Lovely liece, the title also reads well.

[An owl on the moon]

Vanessa, thank you so much! I run to this world when mine becomes overwhelming. We all need secret places to find peace. May your weekend bring you endless peace, dear poet.

[V]

Thank you very much for your kind words. I like to escape too. You are welcome, it was very nice to read.

[SleeplessVolcano]

How ironic, how what seems to be cold, could stir such warmth and heat and exist in the hearts of lovers....

Inspiring poetry.....need to find a cabin with snow on its roof now...:)

[An owl on the moon]

With the temps in the 90s here, a cabin in the snow sounds perfect! Thank you for your introspective whispers here, my friend. Winter may be coming... but spring always follows. :)

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Snow so loving allows footprints and I am always so grateful to find my steps back to Wonderland and the marvelous magic of such a wondrous magician. As always I am inspired by the beautiful longing in your mind. Kudos!!!

[An owl on the moon]

Dear poet, as always I am overjoyed with your presence. Thank you for your endless kindness, even in the cold and darkness of this Wonderland.

[Lucien Maier]

god the cadence in this is just right on point.. good work

[An owl on the moon]

I appreciate you so much, Lucien!

[Lucien Maier]

I appreciate the work my friend. What other piece by you would you like me to look at?

[An owl on the moon]

Perhaps My Last Great Darkness. It is one I am walking through now. Thank you!

[Pryde Foltz]

I live now in winter
This wildness of winter waiting
Immersed in snow
I live in winter
And yet I live
For seasons are not stone
They are alive in me
With all the echoes of you.

Hauntingly beautiful write,Craig. Always a pleasure to read your words:)

[An owl on the moon]

Thank you so much for your sweet presence, Pryde. Sometimes I wish my poems weren't so autobiographical. :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Then they wouldn't be true ... but be your own summer ...hey:):):)

[An owl on the moon]

So true on every level. Summer is coming... :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You don't post as often as you use to but when you do you continue to amaze with your heart felt artistry.

[An owl on the moon]

My friend, so good to have you by! I appreciate your words so much, and I do want to find the time to come back more often.

[softlyfall]

Rich, nuanced, ethereal and tender with naked emotion.
You are a true romantic, and have a great gift.

[An owl on the moon]

Your words and soul are deeply appreciated. Winter is a dark, wondrous muse.