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Wordless

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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Carry me to a wordless world...

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Carry me to a wordless world

On rippling currents of incandescence

Where music blossoms agelessly

Pulsing peace in every note

Upon the ocean’s cresting wildness

Rising on transcendent sunfire

Azure waters and azure waves

A thousand, thousand years of water

Let me rest in the ambiance of you

Luminous atmosphere of angels

There above that steep, rocky ridge

Reminiscing of a world ineffable

Inexpressible in wonder

Forever wordless.

 


© 2017 An owl on the moon



Author's Note

An owl on the moon
“Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing
and rightdoing there is a field.
I'll meet you there.
When the soul lies down in that grass
the world is too full to talk about.”
― Rumi

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Every line in this poem is so gentle, so endlessly lulling...you have crafted a beautiful world,
where the air would be rich with the sound of music, and the waves like molten gold under the brilliant sunshine. I take that by wordless you mean free from all arguments, and talks of war...a world as tranquil as a song...
"Upon the ocean’s cresting wildness
Rising on transcendent sunfire," are my favourite lines from here.


Posted 1 Year Ago


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An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

I so deeply appreciate your kindness and peaceful light that you bring with you. And yes, may the wo.. read more


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I love your poem and the quote by Rumi
Love is about acceptance
and they say when you meet the one
silence befalls you
because there is something louder speaking
that is your emotions making this exchange of approval
A hand shake that never ends

Beautiful .......

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Your words were so beautifully moving. Thank you for sending such encouraging thoughts, and for spea.. read more
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Beautifully written…this is a place I'd like to be.

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your kindness, and may you find that place soon. :)
Like a song it lulls me.. Such a splendid poem

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

So glad you came by to listen to the music. Thank you dear poet.
This is so ethereal and so very beautiful :) Each line holds such imagery of both poignancy and charm, a delight to absorb :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

What a joy to have you by, dear Poppy! Your words are such an encouragement to me, and your life a t.. read more
lovely utopian vibe - happiness should come from natural happiness, not materialistic whims

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

That is so true; the secret to a life of joy. May you find this utopia always rising in you, dear po.. read more
'Rising on transcendent sunfire'

Tis said that silence is golde; it is. Emptying the mind, focussing on... a flower, a pebble - something you need to see. Letting it slowly, slowly fade . so that in fading there's nothing but nothing.. calm as calm can be. Silence.

Beautiful and inspiring words, Owl.

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

I am so grateful for your coming here tonight, and I so hope you always find the path to that place .. read more
emmajoy

1 Year Ago

Lifetimes are often in the mind,Owl.... it's a case of tugging them away from unwanted places and fa.. read more
Great poetry. Isn't it ironic how people always want to be heard, or hear what is the latest piece of information, but in the end, we find peace when those words remain absent :) Love your quote about Rumi too......I tried to find that field recently on the roads Rumi walked....did not quite find it. Who knows, maybe it is only a place our words can describe, but our bodies may never be able to go there.....:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

I so appreciate your thoughts here! Thank you. Yes, I heard recently that so much of our talking, ou.. read more
This poem have made me remember what words can do when they dance harmonically to create the imagery you portrayed for us, thank you Craig for sharing this with me

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

What a joy to have you by again, dear Latifa. Thank you! Hoping that words will grow like seeds in a.. read more
nice job! "Wordless" puts me there in that field .. a place one doesn't really need that "other" to be there .. but it adds such a quiet tone of romance and health ... i think "azure" is well used in writing but it doesn't seem to matter as the rest of your images inspired and i thoroughly enjoy the closing ... i am an introvert and so "Forever wordless" is a fine place of peace ;)
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Very happy you came by and shared your encouragement and your insights. Smiling now as I understand .. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

:) ..................
I'm left imagining how a wordless world would feel like. Maybe that's why we're so far from finding the true meaning of peace... the ripples of words in the sea of silence are sometimes too much to bear perhaps...
Lovely piece, Craig.

Posted 1 Year Ago


An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

I am always so honored by your presence, dear Yumna. Thank you. I believe you see it there, peace th.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ah I so wish that...
You're welcome, Craig. A pleasure :)

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