O, the sorrow of us all

O, the sorrow of us all

A Poem by An owl on the moon
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Born amidst a long-term period of depression.

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O, the sorrow of us all,

to wander the earth in a shell.

And looking to the heavens,

we lay to rest in hell.

The suffering of the innocent

in the midst of Jacob’s well.

How the miles fled between us,

and that distance is still great.

Though on the same shore we now sit,

in temporal quietude to wait.

The moon is our bright witness;

it will lead us to the gate.

© 2018 An owl on the moon


Author's Note

An owl on the moon
This year my poetry and prose will come from my first book, An Owl on the Moon: A Journal from the Edge of Darkness. On these pages I etched the dark and light of my soul.

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I've always marvelled at how you carry out your pieces, they're inspiring for me, as is this one...
'The suffering of the innocent
in the midst of Jacob’s well.'
These lines just reached out to me...
And I'm glad you'll be posting poetry from your book. I've yet to complete it, have only read halfway ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An owl on the moon

6 Years Ago

That made me smile. I began that book in the midst of a deep depression, and somehow in the midst of.. read more



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I've always marvelled at how you carry out your pieces, they're inspiring for me, as is this one...
'The suffering of the innocent
in the midst of Jacob’s well.'
These lines just reached out to me...
And I'm glad you'll be posting poetry from your book. I've yet to complete it, have only read halfway ;)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An owl on the moon

6 Years Ago

That made me smile. I began that book in the midst of a deep depression, and somehow in the midst of.. read more
Though on the same shore we now sit,
in temporal quietude to wait.
The moon is our bright witness;
it will lead us to the gate.

I totally love this write, and this part,
This is really good. wonderful write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your encouragement! :)
Another year for the world.
Another year for us to start again.
Will anything change, who knows.

Posted 6 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughts, Paul. I can only hope for the better, and make what I can better. May y.. read more
Paul Bell

6 Years Ago

Thanks, you too.
i like the journey ..and the comparison to the sufferings and joys of Israel .. one can't help but wonder about that gate ;) i think the souls will be countless
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

6 Years Ago

We've entered through a new gate now, a new year, and you may well find yourself dancing. :)
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

well....it is a new year ..and a new morning today ..as far as dancing ..i do, do the shuffle pretty.. read more
A beautiful poem, one of the most impressive on this site. I especially like and embrace the last two lines, "The moon is our bright witness; it will lead us to the gate." It's an inspirational, hopeful message to me.

Posted 6 Years Ago


An owl on the moon

6 Years Ago

Thankful to have you here again, my friend. I look forward to reading your inspirations all year.

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