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Wow, this is just brilliant write. So colorful and creative like a ainted sky!! I love the format you did! awesome and bittersweet

Love n respect,
Anna

Pleasures
Glued together
They make me
They undo me
They stir me
Bits of tears
First kiss
Falling
Rising
Calling
Calling
Calling
Please hand me that piece
over there . . .

My fav part!!!!!!! Brilliant write my freind! Thank you

Posted 1 Year Ago

Brilliant poem, and really well presented too. Loved it. Maybe, if I may make a suggestion, you should change the line pieces of that to bits of that, because I think that bits of this, bits of that sounds better than bits of this pieces of that. It just flows better.
Still a brilliant poem

Posted 9 Months Ago

Aw! This was so heart wrenchingly beautiful!
I can relate to each and every word here and the entire emotion which you have depicted here.
Such a brilliant and thoughtful piece of writing it is
This is what life is all about and thanks a lot for showing its dark sphere to us..
Great work!

Posted 9 Months Ago

I love this! I love how you use so many different fonts for emphasis on each line. Very interesting technique, and it worked very well here. I love the word "calling" being repeated, and get larger each time it's said. Great write!

-Howl<3

Posted 10 Months Ago

"Not quite me/ Without YOUR piece/.../They make me,/They UNDO me../"
This would never have worked, without the stylistic typesetting, but in the hands of the Master, 65 simple words become an elegant, unique and beautiful expression of the pain of lost Love. Thank you.

Posted 10 Months Ago

very philosophical and a generous account of your past and the people who have shaped your life.
wonderful read and very nostalgic

Posted 10 Months Ago

I love poems like this where the simplest words and phrases speak the loudest and most profound. I'm almost speechless. It really touched my heart as I read this. Beautiful writing--as usual. :) Very nice poem! :)

Posted 10 Months Ago

I like that twist on the end. Interesting layout. The lamment poems are sensible and difficult to write, thank you for sharing with us your succinct expressions of a personal experience. Thank you for entering my contest, Best, L.

Posted 11 Months Ago

i like it alot, and while the fonts are REALLY interesting and eye-catching, some of them distract me just enough to make me forget what I'm reading and what you're saying. that's a no-no. but other than having to read it twice, i really thought you did a fantastic job. ;3

Posted 11 Months Ago

:) I love it.

Posted 12 Months Ago

Well mistah... this I chose to read upon my return and well here you go again.... writing up a doozy... I like the title... (My poem Loss Clock has imagery based upon shards...) Nice use of font. Love the movement from internal to external here. The depth of interpersonal relationships can be measured within brokeness.

Posted 1 Year Ago