DAWNING of a NEW DAY

A collaboration with Josie Wentzel on friendship... :)

 

 

How shores and seas separate
a world of our dreaming lives.

No matter the distance,
a true friendship can still survive.

On winded wings a voice calls,
Singing a song that never ends.

With the gentlest whisper,
The heartache can mend.

With the songs of the sunrise,
We will turn to the east,

 

And on the bright rays of a new day

Our friendship will feast.

 

In deep shades of blue, cloudless skies,
A song of enduring music will arise.

 

A breath of fresh air begins to surround us -

A new day to which we open our eyes.

 

That sun will lift the darkest steely night.
Take a moment; please sit and stay.

 

Be with me through the darkest hours,

And watch as the sadness begins to fade away.

 

Full meadows alive with colored dreams,
See bright butterflies of golden hue.

 

These days are filled with memories;

Yes, this is a friendship so true.

 

 

Reviews

[Seriana]

This is wonderful! I don't know how I missed it. What a loving tribute to what a friendship can bring, and give to another. And you. Such sweet, uplifting gentle words, you two. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Gandré]

Full meadows alive with colored dreams,
See bright butterflies of golden hue.



These days are filled with memories;

Yes, this is a friendship so true. ----------------------this was such a great ending! Loved your collaborated poem, honest friendship it is - that's what I read from your poem. Wonderful.

[emmajoy]

Great collaboration.. the union of thoughts and feelings ring out loud and clear.

[Charlène Boutin]

What beautiful words... The fruits of this collaboration are sweet and ripe, showing the truth of your friendship with words that go straight to the heart. Your words weave the meaning of friendship in a strong web of emotion.

[just is]

This warms the heart, I like this it's beautiful, wonderful collab

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A spectacular collaboration... really warmed my heart reading this... I can see the friendship between you two is strong.

[Kitty]

Thanks for this... It was fun...