HAPPILY WAITING...

I was smiling when I wrote this one... :)

 

 

In the darkness of morning comes the longing

the happy sense that you are somewhere

waiting for me…

 

And in the rays of sun there shines desire

your smile laced in beams of light

smiling for me…

 

Follows the fullness of my hours and days

the peace and joy that rests in your life

reaching for me…

 

And now in this moment I hope and pray

That you feel me longing, desiring, reaching

for you with all I am…  happily waiting…

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

What a lovely poem, full of bright hope and sweetness.

'In the darkness of morning comes the longing
the happy sense that you are somewhere
waiting for me�'

Those words are so optimistic which is how we should all feel and, you've chosen such careful phrasing there and all the way through.

Thank you so much for sharing yet another of your lovely posts. It's going into Favourites.

[Brianna Brie]

This is a soft and lovely poem. The last verse is full of love.

[Wicahpi]

hopeful and romantic.
thanks for your entry into my contest.
good luck!

[Tate Morgan]

Man i like this one it takes me deep into forgotten memories storeddeep in the subconscious I loved it

[Lizanne]

How love's ray of bright sunshine brighten the days. Just the thoughts of this joyful event lightens the heart and brings warming rays of light into our lifes. This is a beautiful expression of the thoughts sent with a prayer of love to someone that has captured your heart. Full of good vibrations and will leave many of the opposite sex saying please let me be the receiver of these wonderful thoughts. Cyrano would be envious of your talent!

[DC Gentleman]

This is absolutely beautiful.. I think we've all felt like this at some point... and I love the rhythm and structure...

Excellent write..

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautifully written love poem

[Gheeneil]

I like the cheerful mood despite the gloomy condition. I feel not only longing but a sense of hope too. While some could be too dark when depressed, yours takes a twist. The thought sticks solely on what is wonderful and beautiful. A lovely write.

[Kelley]

A very touching poem Craig I loved the flow of it.
thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Mandi]

This is really pretty.I didn't expect it at all! I loved it!~

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The world does have such a brighter feel when you know that someone special is out there... another beautiful crafted piece of art.