SEEDS OF HEAVEN

Sowing seeds...

 

You hear that song? 

It’s mere vibration, not magic.

The sights you see?

They’re reflected light, how tragic.

But all we are and hope to be?

A ribbon, a thread in eternity…

 

In minds of earth

Only sky and skin, no more.

In halls of life

Merely iron hinges on a door.

Yet depths of life reside below

When seeds of heaven now we sow…

 

Author's Note

Words are like seeds
of flowers or weeds
watch what you sow
for soon they will grow.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh how true... I like how you express these words of wisdom without being preachy... it is true that what we say seems to have great effects... sadly it takes a 1000 kind words to make up for one hurtful one.

[lindsay]

This is so simple yet so eloquent at the same time. I like the words you choose and how it flows together with your idea. Well done.

[MagiCrystal]

You have a heart of Gold.. done.. said it.. finito

[Tate Morgan]

But all we are and hope to be?

A ribbon, a thread in eternity…
I felt the pulse race at this thought braVO
tATE

[An Ordinary Woman]

It's beautiful, like a prayer, soft & gentle. Perfectly magnificent to read out loud.

[lost inside]

Awe this is so lovely and wonderful
such an enjoyable read.

[Butterflymom]

This well done, and quite beautiful!!!

[Anastasia Starlena]

Very wise words indeed. So very true. Excellent piece.

[emmajoy]

How very lovely! You've put words into a beautiful setting, like links to a bright chain.

'A ribbon, a thread in eternity�' that phrase sums it up for me.


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