In You are Meadows...

What a stunning analogy. Craig, your love poems are romantic, sensual and passionate to the tenth power. I'm trying to find a favorite line or phrase, but I'm finding it difficult, for every single line whispers unto itself while complimenting the next. I like the juxtaposition of winter whispers and screaming summers which suggest that love affairs are both quietly intimate yet lustfully passionate as well.... the bottom line being that we love like this when it is true to the heart, soul and mind.

I feel your little ripples...I feast on rich berries...I give you my mountains...Feel the steady rain of my fingers...Painted auntumn blush.... all so very wonderful!

The narrator loves totally, completely and unconditionally as he hears her yearnings, submits to her passion...cleaves on to her flesh and...her mind. Indeed you create a garden bed filled with the most precious of gifts.

Conclusion is perfect...perfect...perfect. 'In you are meadows."....

ps. Oh, how I would love to be in that graphic! It's gorgeous.

Posted 5 Months Ago

Wow...this was absolutely amazing. One of the best I've ever read. Well done, very well done. :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

Whoaa Craig! OMG, this is amazing! What a gorgeous romp through nature's sensuality you have just spun me into. Beautifully crafted as only one as talented as you can do. So many superb stanzas with beautiful imagery of lusciousness and deliciousness. I'm just blown away by this!
Thanks for submitting this to my Valentine's contest!

Helena

Posted 1 Month Ago

Great poem

Posted 1 Month Ago

This is beautiful. Made me smile. :)

Posted 1 Month Ago

i loved this.
favorite line-
"i give you
my mountains
to surround you
shelter you"
i feel i can tell what this poem is alluding to but its put in a way that puts something that can be raw and harsh into a soft and loving light.
xxxx

Posted 2 Months Ago

Exquisitely beautifully....stunning...very romantic indeed...I loved it!

Posted 2 Months Ago

What a beautiful description. Even though it did not speak of its actual meaning, it still had this hidden beauty to it. Thank you for participating in my contest =]

Posted 3 Months Ago

This reminds of the goddess of earth, giving life to you, to everything and everybody. I loved
I feast on
rich berries
ripe
dripping
within the fragrance
of your extravagant
apricot and honey.
What a beautiful images...

Posted 4 Months Ago

This is really stunning. Its sweet and sensual and very visual. I liked the line:

My skin
like a brook
moves over
your smooth stones
swaying curves.

I think that adds a real feel of movement to this piece. Really beutiful job.

Posted 4 Months Ago

The phrase "in you are meadows" at first threw me until I read it several times and then I was like, ahhh.......

Such a lovely picture you painted here, my poet brother.

Posted 4 Months Ago