BREATHE YOU IN

 

How I want to breathe you in
caress the scent of your silken skin
and let the sun and skies
be ever found within your eyes…

Let my warmth drift over you
melding, melting strokes renew
endless passion in your voice
overshadowing, consuming choice…

Unwrapping treasure’s golden hue
within without surrounding you
until the sunlight greets your face
in endless sighs within this place…

Wrapped warmly in my loving arms
and I so stirred by your endless charm
smiling laughter will be our song
here together where we belong…

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

Sexy photo. Your usual soft, sensuous splendor, Craig, You know how to make a woman feel warm and fulfilled as it is felt in your whispers. I can just see her gazing into eyes filled with kindness and love...

'Let my warmth drift over you
melding, melting strokes renew
endless passion in your voice
overshadowing, consuming choice...'

Love this stanza... The contrast of choice/comsume is amazing...

[FiveOrchids]

so passionate and loving. it's almost like I'm intruding on something intimate between lovers

[jean :]]]

Beautiful poem :)

[Sean M. Addams]

this has a magic feel to it... very stunning and full of charm and love... overall i thought you did a great job on this the rhyme is great and the imagery is awesome some woman out there are eating these words up... very nicely done!!

[ZaZa]

This is very passionate and beautiful. I really enjoyed this piece.

[Wildfleour]

Scrumptous!

[Helen Woodward]

This is such a gentle piece Craig, but then that is your favored writing style...such beautiful, flowing grace here. Thoughts made words, pure, loving and consummate.
I don't think this needs a mature rating hon, up to you though.
I thoroughly enjoyed the pace of this.
Kudos~

Helen~

[Abd-afeez]

So much passionate and beautiful. How better can one show love in so few verses. I mean you always know how to twist word wonderfully to show the effect you want.

[Stacey Watts]

Very beautiful romantic piece. The words of passion here. Excellent job.

[Ladysue]

Beautiful and sensual with a gentle flow...A pleasure to read...

[MagiCrystal]

One word.. Love ...it fills all the space in this poem...Masterpiece..I am lost in your love.