Coffee-flavored lips

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Your coffee-flavored lips so warm

Singular smile that melts my storm

A stroke as soft as chamomile

Within your touch, I deeply feel

A treasured life for us to share

Meadowed wilds without a care

Dancing in the garden lane

And Spanish omelets in the rain

Laughing in our happy place

Days of loving, days of grace

Our reflections now we see

I for you, and you for me

Your coffee-flavored lips so warm

Come smile, melting my steely storm...

 

Reviews

[Kristallo]

Awe inspiring. Such a warm and pleasant picture of love. 'Meadowed wilds without a care', I was really incensed by that line. This is enchanting and affectionate, very much enjoyed reading from the caress of your amorous penmanship. Superbly written. :)

[Allie :)]

Your rhyming pattern is quite all over the place, some lines you've decided to rhyme, and others, you simply give up... :)
But that surely does not take away from the orginal intent of this piece. :)
You've described the feeling of being in love almost perfectly :) Great write!

[snickerdoodle]

yahoo for coffee much tastier than cig lips, beer lips but different than citrus orange kisses

[Devika Garg]

OHHH amazing!! This is so beautiful, so simple and yet so elegant! Very sensuous as well. You engaged me completely for that one minute of reading.

[storiestotell]

Beautiful heart warming poem! It made me feel warm and happy, excellent write as always!

[imagination101]

As always a brilliant rich poem with desireable romance and love! Love the title and your words were as smooth as silk!

[A]

I always say that you are such an artist Craig :)
Aren't you Mr. Perfect?
this is amazingly sweet, so sweet! You left me speechless.
Thank you for sharing you talent with us.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like the lines , I for you, and you for me... and the entire poem is sweet loving and so romantic.
Beautiful x 1000,000,000,000,000 a lot of times!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

I had to read this with my own cup of coffee, haha. I loved this. Beautifully written. A great write!

[arlery]

Awww. This is so sweet, so classic.
It was well written and I loved it.
Thumbs up Craig !