"Now I take her into me
share my book with her
until we know
can read each glance
each whisper
each touch…"
Poetical Prowess!!! This was fantastic! From the subtle flow to the image at the beginning to set the mood of the piece....you crafted an intelligently phrased piece. The type so delicately thought of that i cannot help but be enthralled in the book (pun intended) :)
I really love this opem because i can really see the pictures in my head of how intimate the relationship is and every move that the two make with each other. I can also sense the strong sense of passion the man has for her and also wanting to give himself to her as well as she had allowed him...all in all I thought this poem was great I understood every word, and to me that's the most important part of being a poet.you captured this attitude in your writing perfectly. I look forward to more of your pieces.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much for your kind, uplifting words, Sangeetha. I look forward to reading your poetic s.. read moreThank you so much for your kind, uplifting words, Sangeetha. I look forward to reading your poetic soul.
8 Years Ago
Aww that's so sweet thank you so much I do hope you like them
Absolutely beautiful poem with such wonderful imagery and you have a way of just pulling the reader into your poem so it is as if the reader is right inside the poem feeling all the emotion. Wonderful!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
So very glad you came to visit, dear poet. May your new week bring endless inspirations. :)
Marvelous, wish this never end...as you left your readers seeking more!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much, dear poet. May we all find such "books" that we only desire more pages to feast u.. read moreThank you so much, dear poet. May we all find such "books" that we only desire more pages to feast upon. :)
8 Years Ago
Well surely you have that magic in your writing and you're most welcome!
Wow amazing one.........but can't keep this kind of book..lol..
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
It's true... it's a very rare kind of book. lol.. May you find one that satisfies you all the days o.. read moreIt's true... it's a very rare kind of book. lol.. May you find one that satisfies you all the days of your life. :)
You really make everything you rite beautiful after reading this I was inspired to rite on the similar lines do check the book you love,let me know wht you think :) I love your poems
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Ah, dear Ria! Thank you! It lifts my soul to know you were inspired here. :)
2024 is here... May we make it so much more heaven than hell... Wishing all peace on earth... Together, maybe we go the distance...
The night has a thousand eyes,
And the day but one;
Yet t.. more..