C H A S I N G *** LANDSCAPES

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

While dreams chase landscapes

Elusive across rickety bridges

And the fabric of her curved lines

She has October in her eyes

Hair laced golden on shadows

Skin soft as silken daffodil wings

How I taste the sapphire on her lips

What is the wilding world to me?

Do I slip it on like constricted shoes?

Or do I dance raindrop barefoot?

She giggles her warm laughtering trill

Magnificent music she plays over space

Making me believe that she’s more

Than light lit letters on a leafed page.

Reviews

[Nautili]

You are one of my favorite writers on this site. Your word choices are works of art. This one reminded me of the many times the book i am reading becomes an entirely different universe that I am observing, and how easy it would seem at times to drop right in and be a part of that fantastical place.

[The Cobra Lounge]

Amen..a favorite indeed.

[Kristallo]

Passions larger than the far reaches of imagination are displayed here in the loveliest harmony. You describe romance with such esoteric grace that it takes my breath away. Truly a spell-binding journey into the star strewn spirit of love and adoration, your ideals are magnificent and you convey them with such a delicate hand. I always love how visual your work is, how it ignites all the senses with its powerful prose and imagery. Another flawless write, dear friend.

[Priscilla Moore]

Beautiful. Reads like a smooth melody. Brings contentment to the reader. Wonderfully done:)

[K]

delectable poem...i could immerse my self in your work, you choose such word play that brings sighs to my lips.

"She has October in her eyes
Hair laced golden on shadows
Skin soft as silken daffodil wings
How I taste the sapphire on her lips

exquisite!

[Antonio Valentino]

you are a chevalier my comrade.. a poemwright of equisite caliber.. an originator of nostalgic enchantment, and, a sculptor of siren and sincerity..

as far as i.. well heck.. i'm just honored, to call you friend..

dee to the lightful

:)

[Craig Froman]

Ahhhhh... and you, my declamatory, magniloquent, rightly ornamented friend are quite astounding with your words, that can make a sap such as myself sound so majestic... The honor is all mine.. It is! :)

[Antonio Valentino]

hahaha.. very true my friend.. like sap, you are the vital life elixir that runs through all the branches and leaves of this communal poet tree..
bringing growth and enrichment with your fluidity of friendship..

and plus.. i do share though in the honor of our reciprocal support..


:)

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[Crimson Wolf]

Really skillful and powerful writing. Enjoyable romantic poem. You do awesome work!

[Valentine]

Another gem..we all chase after something..to often it is not good for us..it might end better if it was just a leaf on a page,,Lol and god bless,,Kathie

[pumpkin head]

I really love this one, deep and poetic.

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Very lyrical, rhythmic, enjoyable way to describe a (book?) character. A definite re-read. pat

[Black Cat Fever]

An impressive and wonderful romantic love poem for this lady. Grand imagery and full of wonder, hope and desire... let her be real. I sure enjoyed reading this.

[Dawning...]

the sentiments expressed within these lines is breath-taking. You are in "awe" of her, her words, her expression. Wonderfully penned.