lose yourself

lose yourself

A Poem by charleybear

Blood pumping;

Through her veins, it goes running,

Oxygen starved lungs,

To the finish line

She comes;

Sweat dripping off her face

In her mind she goes to a place,

Where she is safe and sound.

The thoughts no longer

Flying round and round.

© 2009 charleybear


Author's Note

charleybear
I hvave terrible grammer and punctuation, so please let me know what i've done wrong. Thank you

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Running away from my problems was always my way of dealing with things. This was a very enjoyable piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago


hmmm... Running from some thing that happened to her perhaps? Finding safety in a net of no thought? It would be nice to blank out that which is bothering us. As they say... Ignorance is bliss.

This was a thought provoking piece. Well penned.
xox
Cherri

Posted 14 Years Ago


is there a map to such a place? :)




Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on February 19, 2009

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Hi My name is Charley. I am a 20 year old lesbian working at Nationwide building society. I've been writing since i was 11. I know I'm not brilliant but i write for my own enjoyment and sanity. Al.. more..

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