The Blonde Girl

A magnificently beautiful story ... Some might say that it was sad to read, and did not have a happy ending ... But I say, this story is perfect in that perfect timing of two people meeting, clueless that they would ever meet, who needed someone special in their lives at that precise moment in time. She gave you something no one else ever could have, and you gave her more than you will ever know, even though you do know ... This story is tender and touching to the very core of any heart that has ever had a first crush or first love, especially someone as special as I see that she was to you ... And you to her ... A wonderful memorial to her memory in keeping her memory alive ... Thank you for sharing ... Very well written ...

Posted 9 Years Ago

AMAZING... JUST WOW, LOVE EVERYTHING

Posted 5 Years Ago

I don't have much words to say, but this is beautiful and sad at the same time. Lovely.

Posted 6 Years Ago

This story is lovely. Heartfelt. And hits home truly. Thank you for asking me to read.

Posted 6 Years Ago

This is just beautiful.You are very talented. Please never stop writing, this touched me deeply is just beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago

this is a wonderful story, I love everything about it. You did a great job leting it unfold.

Posted 6 Years Ago

This is really a very beautiful story, the beginning was a bit sad when Chase gets bullied but I love the part where he meets Sara (The Blonde Girl) I love the relationship they had as bestfriends and that they were in love... I love the purity of the friendship and how they automatically clicked as good friends.. The part where she dies is a sad part but I feel that Chase will always have her memory in his heart and that way she will live on.. This was a great read for me, I was mesmerized by the whole story and the conversations that Chase has with Sara... Thank you for sharing....:) :) :)

Posted 6 Years Ago

Such a beautiful, moving tale! It truly is heart-wrenching when these angles leave our earth. This story is touching and heartfelt all the way through. The friendship is beautiful and clearly a needed source of support and guidance for both sides, and the love is so pure and distilled. I know it’s a cliché thing to say, but part of Sara will always live on. The lives she touched were changed for the better and will always live on in their hearts. I could practically see Sara and her warmth as I read. It shows great strength to write this story and share such a tender, vulnerable story with the world.

Posted 6 Years Ago

There are so many beautiful, touching themes in this story. It shows how people who are different are so often excluded and shunned, and how one simple action (like talking with someone new) can change things for the better. It was sweet to see the characters grow and learn from each other, even though I could see where the story was going. I'm sure there's not much I could say that someone else hasn't already said, so I'll be quick. Very tender, inspirational, and heart-wrenching story. I'm glad I read this story.

Posted 6 Years Ago

Wow, this really made me feel, my mind is filled with emotion. As someone who has lost people to cancer, I can relate so much to this. It was a brilliant story. A young girl on her way out still looked on the bright side and had fun all the way to the end. Even though this was sad, thanks for sharing. You are a brilliant writer, you really know how to get people to feel. Well done mate.!!

Posted 6 Years Ago

Wow, What a powerful tale, you have touched my heart with this pure, emotional retelling. I am sorry to hear about the passing of the tender-hearted girl in the story :( Yet, I see she lives on in the way you live, in your writing, in your soul. I have ADHD too, and it has affected my life in many such ways, but not as immensely as you I think. However, it was encouraging to read about someone who has gone through so much, I am sure you are stronger in some ways because of it, and those who hurt you will never have those strengths you have gained from the mountains life made you climb. Your writing is creative and bright, keep it up. I enjoyed that so much. (: -Ellie

Posted 6 Years Ago