Candy

Candy

A Poem by C. Lee Battaglia
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Sweet

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Candy


Written By: C. Lee Battaglia


Sweet and sour,

You're my wildflower.

You’re my candy,

Such a beauty

Sorry but you’re mine.

It’s hard to define,

You’ve helped me out in so many ways.

With you, I feel like I can get through any maze.

So please never leave my side,

You’re my one and only pride.

Every time you’re with me,

It helps me realize who I want to be.

So Sugar,

Stay by me and I'll be your Sir.

I can’t stop thinking about you,

Those eyes so blue.

I can’t ever get enough,

Because you're my favorite type of stuff.

When you go,

I feel so low.

When you're around,

My feet are high above the ground.

So please stay,

Because every time, you make my day.




© 2017 C. Lee Battaglia


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Wonderful use of words and thoughts. I had to read again. When someone is so sweet. We are in great danger. Thank you Lee for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Thank you for entering your piece into my competition.

I thought it was very sweet, simple and anyone who received such a poem would be happy, I am sure of it!



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

C. Lee Battaglia

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
I love it so cute and sweet. Pardon my pun, but I think it's quite a great piece. You may want to extend it though it kinda has an abrupt ending. Still great job! Keep up the great work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

C. Lee Battaglia

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
I really appreciate the review. I will make it longer.
P.S
Great pu.. read more
C. Lee Battaglia

7 Years Ago

I added more to it...
Eden-Rose

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you added more it makes it feel complete. I absolutely love this poem and I think you did a.. read more

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C. Lee Battaglia
C. Lee Battaglia

Alpine, UT



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My name is C. Lee Battaglia and I love to read… I read so much that my Mom grounds me from reading and tells me to go do something else. I am 20 years old. I hated reading when I was little .. more..

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