My Dismissal

There they laughed

There they spat

Here I cry

Here I'll die

My dismissal is near

My dismissal It'll be

Soon I'll be free

Soon I'll be gone

Author's Note

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Reviews

[ayesha cullen]

Short, powerful with a mighty punch! Keep up.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you so much!

[emipoemi]

Need you any? The only thing that's iffy about it is that "it'll" does't fit in the musicality (you can go poetic and say "'twill" and that would make the musicality flow better), but this on the whole is wow! Short, powerful, and profound! Well done!

[Anjali]

Short but contains deep emotions, so deep.. I really liked it!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you so much! :) it means a lot

[Anjali]

You're very welcome!

[Zoya]

Emotion-packed this one. Much said in few words. Great job!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you Zoe!

[Zoya]

No worries

[Coyote Poetry]

Direct and hard thoughts. You made the reader feel the disappointment and need to escape. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.