Mother, Farewell

Mother, Farewell

Written by: C. Lee Battaglia

Mother, farewell

I’m leaving today

I know it might be hard

But no matter what,

I’ll be here

In your heart

I’ll miss you more and more

Everyday

But mother, don’t be sad

Because now I’m happy

Mama you could of made everything better

But I couldn’t do the same

Now is your chance

To do the things you’ve

always wanted to do

Go see the world

Spain, France, Italy,

England, Germany, Russia,

Don’t be sad,

Because I’m in a better place

Mother, Farewell

I’ll see you in another place.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching and complete piece that guards emotion well, good read, well done.

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you Thomas! I really appreciate your review here!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

We are only loaned to eachother for a certain amount of time - nobody belongs to anybody- there comes a day where we need to say farewell but yes in the heart we stay forever- lovely words - meaningful and deep🌹

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you for the great review! Every review I get from you I smile! Thank you once again!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I’m glad you smiling and happy- my pleasure always🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the poem. You are leaving and you are giving your mother good advice. A wonderful poem my friend. Hard to lose your children. But we must. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you Coyote! I really appreciate the kind words!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[emipoemi]

Ok.....this took a dark turn for me. I can't figure out whether you had meant to make that turn, but it was a serious "whoa!" moment for me. So sad, but so powerful and profound. WOW! I think this is one of your best. This is a keeper. Well done!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Thank you once again for the great review! You really think this is one of my best? That makes me super happy! Thank you!

[emipoemi]

my pleasure.