The Truth Behind Thunderstorms

A poem about thunderstorms and the roll thunder, lightening etc. play.

The Truth Behind Thunderstorms

Thunder claps the rhythm

The lightening flashing across his sheet of music

So he can continue playing

Clouds annoyed by the ruckus blacken the sky, covering the sun

The rain falls freely, not engaging in this horseplay

Author's Note

Hope you enjoyed, please review!

Reviews

[Writer *78*]

I enjoyed this very much, but I also think you could expand on it a little more. When I read it I saw thunder lightning clashing together. With the line "He continued playing" all I see is Zues up in the clouds playing around and the greek gods having fun with him. Every line was like it was invented by the gods. I have to admit this IS the best poem you have written thus far. You really have a nack as they say for writing. Very well done.

-Writer *78*

[Sarah Jane]

I love this. I personally am terrified of thunderstorms and your poem makes the event more personable. I think the length is perfect, short and sweet. very nice write :)

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Short and cool! I love thunderstorms!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like your logic in this poem. Mother Nature does create music for our ears. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Adelia Alighieri]

Brrrrilliant. I love the style, keep writing!

[Sunflower 20]

i like its simplicity, but i think you could add to it a little. Overall, nicely done :)

[trainwreck]

Nice little poem. I like how short it was. Keep it up! Your style is starting to evolve.

[Theodore]

nice short funny poem i like it keep it up...

[littlelilypurplebride]

I loved this short sweet and simple sounded like God playing in the clouds i love it. god bless lily

[Greg Skura]

:) Nice!