Friendship

Friendship

A Poem by Chelsea
"

The dance of friendship.

"

Friendship

Dancers twirl about

My eyes seek the ones.......

With similar strengths and weaknesses

We step in life together,

One step at a time;

Holding one another when weak

Laughing all the way

Friendship

 


© 2010 Chelsea



Author's Note

Chelsea
Dedicated to all of my friends (also my chums here on writerscafe!). One person in particular.. HANNAJADE! She's my best friend ever, just so you all know :)
Now to the poem....I used dance as a comparison to friendship. Usually you select your friends based on similarities, not usually differences. Then the poem just goes into how you help one another out! Friendship, the best gift of all! I’m so glad for it :)

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Lovely poem so true too! We need friendships like we need air. I think this applies to women more than men.

Posted 7 Years Ago


ahaha chelsea i love this!! and i love you!! my favourite line is defaintly "holding one another when weak", it really hit me.., the idea of comparing dancing to friendship is awesome.
iloveyou, and missyou, and your bff as well(:

Posted 7 Years Ago


a wonderful poem dances across this page... one of my favorites by you I believe :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like the spaces inbetween the lines and the short sentences it's really effective.
"We step in life together, one step at a time." What more can be said?
Your poem speaks alot of truth.

Posted 7 Years Ago


aw, this is really cute! nice job! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Now I have to call my best friend of 36 years to tell her I love her! We do tell each other that all the time...

what a sweet poem about wonderful friendship.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Good job...nice light and sweet poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a great way to describe friendship.

Posted 7 Years Ago


this is a really cute piece of writing. I could almost see it in a card. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


(: wonderful work of art!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on November 22, 2010
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Tags: friendship, dancers, strenghts, weaknesses, weak, laughing

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Chelsea
Chelsea

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