Eyes of Killers

Eyes of Killers

A Poem by Chelsea
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A deadly game of two killers.

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Eyes of Killers

Stalking you

With my clunking boots

 

Stalking you

With my padded paws

 

My sight is set

Going in for the kill

 

My glowing eyes seek you

I’m ready to kill

 

Bam!

 

Meow!


© 2011 Chelsea



Author's Note

Chelsea
If anybody understands what I'm talking about, you get a million dollars! Kidding, but once again.... I'm not going to give it away in the author's note. So tell me what you thought I was talking about!
PS message me if you'd like to know my meaning!

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Aww, I have a cat named smokey and that little stinker is just how you describe..lol At night his little glowing eyes are all you see, and he will creep up behind you and just before you know it BAM!!!! he has punced on you and tries to climb up your leg....LOL This was a cool poem and very sweet!



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I think its a man and an animal attacking one another. Its wonderful to read all of the diffrent ideas. nice write

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love the picture! I think you are talking about two killers going against each other: man and animal.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is just like my cat. She's a psycho. She waits until the middle of the night to sneak up on me while I sleep. This was very cute :3

Posted 6 Years Ago


Aww, I have a cat named smokey and that little stinker is just how you describe..lol At night his little glowing eyes are all you see, and he will creep up behind you and just before you know it BAM!!!! he has punced on you and tries to climb up your leg....LOL This was a cool poem and very sweet!



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And tonight the lion roars, but the little cat purrs, and nestles softly in your lap...Meow....Meow

I love this poem it's fun and very enjoyable

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think it's a cat. I'm a pet sitter, I'm more frightened of cats than I would ever be of dogs. Cat's are vicious! They can really mess you up with their teeth and claws.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought you were talking about a panther. But, this was a very interesting work. Good job.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I say Animal is making his kill on his pray

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem kind of confuses me. At first I thought you were talking about a cat stalking after me, but when I began to analyze the poem deeper I began to see something else with the structures of the poem. I believe there is a hidden meaning here that I'm just not able to comprehend. I'm probably going to be sitting here trying to figure out your poem for a few hours. It's a great poem, but it left me a little confused.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very good i love the imagery here. and i luv the ending

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chelsea
Chelsea

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