Gun in School

Gun in School

A Story by Chelsea
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A gun in a backpack, in a school, what is to become of this?

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Gun in School

It’s my first day at college, my nails read. They are chewed in jagged patterns. Nail biting, I resort to when the nerves kick in.


I am not nervous about it being my first day at college but simply my plan. Upon my back sits a backpack. It’s black and is covered in zipper pulls and key chains. Hidden deep within my backpack is a gun.


I try not to act suspicious as I move around these innocent people. I see so many pretty faces, so many attractive faces, it’s a sad to think that I’m about to shoot and ruin them.


I think about taking the gun and burying it six feet under the ground, along with my evil plans. But no, this is just going to be way too much fun.


My buddy nudges my shoulder, our signal for go time.


I rip the Velcro of my backpack open and whip out a gun. A nerf gun. it shoots its foam bullets!


Bam! I hit a teacher. He gets struck with an orange foam bullet. Another one knocks a steaming cup of coffee upon Dale’s laptop!


I’m going crazy; I feel my control being lost. The room is a sea of orange foam pieces. Sorry janitor.

© 2011 Chelsea


Author's Note

Chelsea
A bit of an inside joke! But I hope you enjoyed.
In case you are wondering a Nerf gun is a little toy gun that shoots foam. You can buy them at toy stores for kids :)
Please review!
Oh and this is dedicated to Dale :)

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I loved this! ^.^ I love the way you talk about the gun like it's real until it gets taken out and the shooting begins. I at first expected a sad story about a school shooting.
Me and a few friends have decided that at the end of this school year or as a senior prank we will get a massive amount of people to start a nerf gun war in the school, haha.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Chelsea, this was great. My heart dropped for a second at this line

"I rip the Velcro of my backpack open and whip out a gun."

Ha ha. Great one!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

haa...you totally had me worried for a moment. good imagination and no joke i am laughing hyseterically. sometimes its good to have a funny perspective on such difficult circumstances.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh this is funny. I thought this was going to be a Columbine story. Cute, I like this twist in your story. Very creative. In this society, it probably wouldn't be very funny in real life.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww this reminds me of my friends! This was fun to read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, a bit twisted humor, but glad it wasn't a real gun! *sighs with relief* great write1 :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well I feel bad for Dale's lap top and what good aim you have. A nice fun write of a good practical joke.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow!!! really well written

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's quite funny. Although when I first started reading I had dread seize hold and I was worried what this crazy kid was about to do. Thankfully it was much less threatening. A good little story.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hahaha! This is very funny. I bet that teacher was mad!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved this! ^.^ I love the way you talk about the gun like it's real until it gets taken out and the shooting begins. I at first expected a sad story about a school shooting.
Me and a few friends have decided that at the end of this school year or as a senior prank we will get a massive amount of people to start a nerf gun war in the school, haha.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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