Breaking of dawn

Like the breaking of dawn you blind me with radiance, the ground crumbles without you the sky breaks in weeping streams behind you, when you step into view the ground becomes steady, the sun smiles an explosion of light trees murmur in unison time stands still. Folding into you it all makes sense, like pieces of a puzzle it falls into place. There is no other world, no other time that will ever feel like home.

 

Author's Note

I know my grammars not the best and I really need to work on it.

Reviews

[Katie]

when you step into view the ground becomes steady, the sun smiles an explosion of light trees murmur in unison time stands still...


What a beautiful piece! Such emotion of love and pureness. I loved it!

[Claire P.]

i felt like this about someone once, it didnt work out... but i truly hope it does for you.

amazing write, i know how hard it is to put feelings into words, but you did a good job at it.

[Nicole]

Wow, I really like this. xD
Effin' amazing.
And I agree with "Blake

[Tiff-AH!-knee�]

awe..

[Blake<3]

I really like this piece.
"Like the breaking of dawn you blind me with radiance"
I love that as the beginning.