FEAR

FEAR

A Poem by cherryblossom

I CAN SEE THE DARKNESS IN YOUR EYES,
TRYING TO GET OUT OF IT BUT YOU CAN'T
I CAN SEE THE PRESSURE SHE IS GIVING YOU,
I CAN SEE EACH AND EVERY TEAR 
WHICH IS ROLLING DOWN YOUR CHEEK,
I AM TRYING TO CLEAN THEM,
BUT YOU DON'T LET ME 
YOU DID A BIG MISTAKE,
FALLING FOR HER,
BUT YOU DID NOT KNOW 
THAT SHE WILL BLOW YOU AWAY
I TOLD YOU SEVERAL OF TIMES
BUT YOU NEVER LISTENED
IF YOU WOULD HAVE
YOU WOULD NEVER BEEN A FEAR.

© 2014 cherryblossom



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Great job! There's a grammar mistake, "That she will blow you away", The Blow should be past tense. Other than that, great poem!

Posted 2 Years Ago


cherryblossom

2 Years Ago

thanks!! :)
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bee
Nice poem..... there is a slight spelling mistake, its "that she will Blow you away"...blew is past tense :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


cherryblossom

2 Years Ago

oh yeah sorry i think i should change it :) and thanks for the review.
bee

2 Years Ago

My pleasure..

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cherryblossom
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maharashtra, mumbai, India



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