sorry

i was such a foolish person to leave you.

but it was not on purpose.

a person just took my heart away.

he just took it.

and then lost you.

but i did not know it will cost you.

so i am really really sorry.

i didn't meant to hurt you.

you were a great guy.

always perfect for a great girl.

you loved me 100%

but i am really really sorry.

but someone took my heart away.

i could not say anything.

i am sorry to say.

but he just took it away.

Reviews

[Ralph Rosell]

Sorry ain't enough!! Especially in that situation.. Felt that one though, sucks when guys steal a girl's heart.. Haven't thought about how the girl can actually feel sorry like in your poem. So, well done! A hint would be to use more deeper or emotional words for "really" :)

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot

[Jace]

Very nice ending and very sad, but the grammar could use a little work. Keep up the good work!

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot and next time i will do the grammar good :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

This is a good poem. Great job!

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot :)