life journey

life journey

A Poem by Urja Gokani

life starts when you are born
some born in a rich family
some in a poor one's
but that does not matter
it's about how you live it
it's about how you dream it
it's about the words that you speak
some people live it like
it's the last day 
some people live it like
a bird they fly
some people complete their dreams 
some people let it go
some people are reborn for that
we get older and older
then our kids weigh on our shoulder
their happiness in ours
their sorrows in ours
but as time passes 
we loose them they go to someone else 
we miss the happiness and the sorrows too
we live till we don't get a free ticket to heaven
we get weaker and weaker 
and we loose our breaths 
we loose our souls
and we die
but before dying the memories flash in our mind
and after dying we get a message from our family
while we get buried 
we get their tear drops on our coffins 
they dry but not their love
new roses and tear drops
come on the soil which cover the coffins
it's so emotional it makes us cry
but you can't come back to life 
to see them for the last time
to hug them tight
this ends our life's journey 

© 2015 Urja Gokani


Author's Note

Urja Gokani
this the longest poem i have ever written i am so excited i hope you all like it
- cherryblossom

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Nice poem. It is definatly a different stylle to what i am customed to, but message was well delivered, i just wish it was more sensitive. Kind of seems a little cold, but you could have been aiming for that so if you were well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


Urja Gokani

8 Years Ago

thanks a lot
A meaningful and thought provoking poem depicting different lifestyles along with the stages of life.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Urja Gokani

8 Years Ago

thanks a lot
An important thing for us all to remember is that our children are on loan only for a short time. Live life with them while we can and embrace everyday like it's our last. There is no price for the time we have on earth and to share our lives with the ones that we love is priceless.

Whether rich or poor shouldn't matter. Life should not be lived as materialistic. In short materialistic items can be replaced where we can not be.

this was great.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Urja Gokani

8 Years Ago

thanks a lot
This is a really good poem, your best so far in my opinion. It has an amazing view to it. But I also think that begin born in a rich or poor family affects your life. Like if you are born in a rich family, you have a lot more support while if you are from a really really poor, sometimes you have no choice but to let go because your family doesn't have enough money. Anyway this is a really good poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Urja Gokani

9 Years Ago

thanks a lot i was shocked when you said "my best poem so far"
Bhumika Devkota

9 Years Ago

You are welcome, it's the best I have read from you.

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Added on January 12, 2015
Last Updated on November 5, 2015
Tags: life, journey, poor, rich, reborn

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Urja Gokani
Urja Gokani

maharashtra, mumbai, India



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Hi I am cherry blossom I love writing poems and stories I am very passionate about writing I hope you all like my writings If you all send me read requests i will surly read the poems :) .. more..

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