Only one line

This is a poem with only one line.

Hot chocolate makes tears disappear.

Reviews

[Midgy]

I would create a pro/con list as I usually do, but I find this piece rather... ambiguous, I guess, so I find it hard to sort what's good and bad, haha.
Firstly, I'd like to say that the single line is a very vague. But straightforward. Honestly, I feel like there's a little bit to be desired. But it leaves the reader guessing what the exact meaning of this poem is, which is good.
Another thing is, would you actually consider this a poem, or a statement ? Technically, there is no structure to this, there is no rhythm, no surrounding context. And yet, it almost seems to be poem-like.
Not bad.

[Fontane Wong]

The "poem" fits the title so well. Only one line. First when I was looking at your writing, this title caught my attention, and now... Maybe that's another kind of writing style(You can try it in your journal and hand in as a homework ^_^) I'll want to try this in my own journal too, if there's a kind of poem like this.

[Archia]

I really enjoyed this, it seemed to have a story behind it.

[Poeticpiers]

May be true but is it a poem?