The fall of anger

The fall of anger

A Poem by masie
"

this is how my thoughts look and feel when im trying to talk when im mad. hectic right?

"

                   R

          E          E

    g                   D a M n e d

N                              A        P

   A                            D e c I e v e d

.    >:[                                  S

.   Why?                             S h i T

 .   Do                                 E      R

.       I                                  D      I

 .      Get                                      S c r e W e d

.     so        </ 3                           T          H

.     mad                                      E          I

 .         at      .                                            P

 .         you        .                                        P

.           ?               .                       o w  n  E d

.    .      i love you.          .                         D

 

© 2009 masie


Author's Note

masie
pissed off....

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woah that is so cool looking

Posted 15 Years Ago


i like the way you entwined the words of anger and the plot in capital, its a puzzle, artful form.

Posted 15 Years Ago


i really like this... i love how abstract it is, and how telling it is. when people are angry it's hard to get all of your thoughts in order some time, and you wind up not knowing why you're feeling the way you are, and not wanting to feel the way you do. i think it paints an amazing picture of how destructive an emotion anger can be.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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masie

Durham, NC



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