Tempation

Tempation

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A cinquain poem about tempation.

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Tempting

Bulging curves

Fleshly rounding mountains

Roaming eyes see her shapely form

 Cleavage 

© 2010 Marie Harrison


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I like how the first two lines come together to make "Tempting Cleavage". You descrived the rest of the temptation well, too. They're bulging round mountains and her form is shapely. That's all the imagery I need. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple, short. I like the use of fleshly but this poem lacks something for me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 5, 2010
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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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