Boats

Boats

A Poem by Marie Harrison
"

A lanterne poem.

"

Boats

Sail by

Leaving me

Waving goodbye

Off

 


© 2010 Marie Harrison



My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

With lantern poems, the last line is supposed to be a word that is a synonym for the first word is it not? I don't see how Off is a synonym for boats. It just doesn't fit. Sure it's an an action you can have by getting off a boat but it's not similar to a boat. I liked the lines in between though, simple and expressive.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I always wish I could be on one of those boats for a unlimited journey. You said it all in so few words. A very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

182 Views
2 Reviews
Rating
Added on June 10, 2010
Last Updated on June 19, 2010
Tags: Sea, Loss, Loneliness, Life

Author

Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



About
Momma told me to get out and enjoy life, so now I'm going to dance. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


The Chamber The Chamber

A Poem by Doreen