Who Can Win?

A poem about men.

Who Can Win?

 

Who can win with men

they love to live in sin.

 

Their love is just a mirage

when they leave they

go to get a tantric massage.

 

They want you safe at home

while they are out to hunt and roam.

 

They want to be your protector

but really they are love rejectors.

 

They want to be your royal king

but without a wedding ring.

 

Who can win with men,

they can only be your lover

not just your friend.

 

Who can win with men

the wind sends them to sin.

 

Author's Note

When I wrote this, I was trying to write a type of rapping rhyme. Something new for me. I'm testing the waters, I suppose.

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Just don't get to wet, nice work

[al25]

I don't think this has a rapping theme. Its more like your frustration with men. Good write though :)